don't you dear !!

[SomeOne Else]

Hey,

all of you are doing just fine :biggrin:,, thats what I feel inshallah


we are going to help each other in English writing, we will support each other so we all can write a perfect paragraph.


it's not a game, it's kind of practice


everyone is requested to write a pragraph about himself / herself or about anything she / he want.

the member after him will correct his mistakes if there is any !!

and so on

I'll start


I'm Saudi Arabian citizen trying to accomplish as much as I can to develop my career. So far I got my diploma in Executive Secretary and thinking of completing my studies. Education is something important to any dreamer person who want to be successful in his life.

[Portia]

Good idea
it will really help to practice on writing but don't u think that members might get botherd if their paragraphs got corrected

>>any way''ill be back

thank u for ur effort

[SomeOne Else]

well, if they considered it as learning !! they will not get bothered.

to me I like to be corrected by others, cause they won't correct me twice

we learn from our mistakes, if we keep getting upset cause others try to make our english perfect, then we will never learn.



sometimes I observed some wrong spelling or grammer here in our section, but as you said I'm afraid to make them upset cause of my correction




just remember ::: we learn from our mistakes


thanks for passing

[Portia]

neither do I
i don't get upset if anyone corrected my mistakes no one perfect and we are still learnig after all
but im just talking out of experience when my classmates got upset if the professor notice he is a professor corrected their mistakes so how about a student

>>any way im not gonna ruin ur topic by talking about this issue
i'll post my paragraph and then u correct it and then,,i'll correct urs

....... regards

[Portia]

Undoubtly,television is the number one of all entertainment devices .Spending alot of time watching television would definitely effects it's viewers .children are most likely to be affected by it's shows.Most of t.v programs are providing violence in one way or in other which surely would effect nigatively childern's behavior.They would be less sensitive to pain or they would be so fearful to the world around them.Added to that,most of the characters that children like are presented in a heroic image this would encourage children to immitate them..Finally,watching t.v should be under the control of parents in order to protect children of such behaviors.