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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : موضوع بالإنجليزي عن satisfaction


*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 27, 05:39 AM
Satisfaction and acceptance

:106::106::106:


these pictures will speak for it self. Main thing is accept who you're , and try to make others happy.

It's Islam isn't it.

:106::106::106:



still complain of discomforts despite working in an office with all modern comforts ....!!!




what about them...???

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/627490184.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/02/738894573.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

do you still complain of hunger

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how about him

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/738672800.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)


tired of sleeping in your cozy bed

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/197522346.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)


how about her

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/216973462.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

tierd of walking on your feet

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/205083219.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

how about him



still don't appreciate the love and care you get from parents& friends

(http://www.0zz0.com)

how about him

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/470124183.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)


comforts make you sleep while studying



how about them

[URL="http://www.0zz0.com"]http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/652000113.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

too luxurios of a bath...& still complain about life

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/247167832.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

how about them

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/547570096.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)


Louis Vuitton not enough
More brands ??

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/586512859.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/01/666015730.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)


how about him

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/02/963954645.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

tired of pleasuring your self from playing games

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/02/801537293.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

how about him

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/02/159207277.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)

and nothing else to do

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/02/825814896.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)


how about them

http://www12.0zz0.com/2012/01/27/02/610433740.jpg (http://www.0zz0.com)








conclusion:

thank Allah for his blessings

If you're in a bad situation

look around and thank Allah

there are worse than you

and try to help poor people

all over the world, even with 1 riyal.

this is our Islam

Thank you

:106::106::106:

Man in light
2012- 1- 27, 06:02 AM
thanks sister for such topic

and for these comparing

really we have to be grateful for the live we have

*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 27, 06:37 AM
thanks sister for such topic

and for these comparing

really we have to be grateful for the live we have


you're welcome brother

and if you excuse me

your spelling for the word live is wrong
the right is life

thank you
:106:

lallamia
2012- 1- 27, 07:14 AM
this is a great topic , thank you sis :106:
i always get angry for not getting a pretty dress or shoes but hopefully this 'll change this year and i 'll thank Allah for what i have & help these poor ppl

P e a c e
2012- 1- 27, 10:45 AM
Nice topic as usual
Thank you very much

and I have some notices, if you don't mind, I think you just missed them while writing, not that you don't know about them

these pictures will speak for it self
"Pictures" is plural, so it must take the pronoun them, and it becomes them selves

Main thing is accept who you're
the word "thing" is singular, and every singular word has to have something before it. Here we should put "The" before "main thing".

The verb comming After "is" should either have "-ing" at the end of it or "to" just before it. So we should write "is accepting" or "is to accept"

Another problem here is that "are" is in a stress possition in the sentence, so it shouldn't be reduced.


there are worse than you


I am not sure of this, and please correct me if I'm wrong.
"worse" can't come as a subject if it's used in comparison
so we should say:
there are people worse than you

And thank you again

*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 27, 01:02 PM
welcome my brother
Radhwan


I'm so glad for your reply

and of course

I'm welcoming for
any
correction or comment

and so happy for it

because it makes us better
in English


:106::106::106:
I think you're right in
using themselves instead of it

and it's called subject and pronoun agreement

:106::106::106:

the second statement

is

main thing is accept who you're


you're right in putting the before main

and it becomes

the main thing is

But

I don't agree with you
in using (to) before
accept

because it depends on the verb it self

I should put it when the statement is like that

we need to accept who we are

to accept = acceptance


but

I should use parentheses
أي الأقواس

the main thing is " accept who you are" and
I agree with you in writing are without
reduction
_________________________

the statement
there are worse than you

I think it's right because it's like

you're better than me

:106::106::106:


شكرا جزيلا أخي رضوان ع التصحيح ولقد استفدت منك كثيرا

وأتمنى أن نعتمد على هذا الأسلوب

حتى نستفيد من بعض اسلوب الكتابه بإتقان

ابو إبراهيم
2012- 1- 27, 01:46 PM
thank you

and you sayed

If you're in a bad situation

look around and thank Allah

there are people worse than you

and try to help poor people

all over the world, even with 1 riyal

this is our Islam

this most important thing

*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 27, 02:42 PM
thank you

and you sayed

If you're in a bad situation

look around and thank Allah

there are people worse than you

and try to help poor people

all over the world, even with 1 riyal

this is our Islam

this most important thing


welcome
أبو إبراهيم

thank you for replying

:106::106::106:

وإذا سمحت لي عندك أخطاء كتابية بصححها لك

sayed
تكتب
said

_________________

this most important thing
تكتب
this is the most important thing

_________________

thank you again

:106:

الحلم العربي
2012- 1- 27, 04:04 PM
Photos and comments of a very great
Sufficient to stop at some of Qila and thank God for blessing us
Baby Face
Put a great

P e a c e
2012- 1- 27, 04:14 PM
:(107):
I didn't get the point about not using (or not to use) "to" before accept

and what I know is
to accept = accepting

the paranthasis (or rather the coatations) is a nice idea, thank you for this :(204):

and about the sentence You are better than me
It's ok; because the two parts of the comparison are there you and me

but if you say
There are better than me
then one of the two parts is missing or not determined clearly

so (I think) it's better to say
there are people better than me

because there is not like you in this sentence
for example you can say
You are nice
but you can't say
there are nice

thank you for giving me the opportunity to discuss these with you :smile:

نجداوي حيل
2012- 1- 27, 04:32 PM
thanks babyface :106:
but we should know what is happening in poor people world that bunch of people are contro the cash flow of the Voluntary money ...not ever things go to the right people
but what we can do ! :106:

*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 27, 07:14 PM
brother Radhwan

thank you I enjoyed discussing

grammar with you

of course we have many things complecated

and

that's why we're English students

thank you

:106:

P e a c e
2012- 1- 28, 02:58 AM
You are welcome

These debates add a lot to my knowledge

Big thanx to you too :smile:

سلامة العنزي
2012- 1- 28, 04:14 AM
Really ,
these peopel look for
Satisfaction and acceptance
I tried to don`t cry

:Cry111:

meedia
2012- 1- 28, 08:54 AM
موضوع رائع جداً يسلمن يارب
الحمد لله على نعمه

*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 28, 02:02 PM
Really ,

these peopel look for
Satisfaction and acceptance
I tried to don`t cry


:Cry111:



thank you

I 'm impressed too

tears are not enough

we have to give a helping hand

________________


and your last sentence is wrong

I tried to don't cry

the right is

I tried to not cry

_______________

thank you

:106:

ســMــــو
2012- 1- 28, 09:57 PM
:love080: thanks :love080:

*(بيبي فيس)*
2012- 1- 28, 10:33 PM
I tried to not cry




oops

sorry

I'm correcting for my self

the right is

I tried not to cry