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Being a broke




Sad At night
Great in the morning
Huge ambition ,with some depression
Play in the Garden ,lie on the Grass
Looking at the sky, Counting the starts
Calling mammy needs some help
Take My Body its your help
I'm a broke But Standing by
Being upset before that night
Going To bed without some wings
My Thoughts feel lonely in my mind
I need to make them having a wife
Being a broke something easy
Being without a wife driving me crazy
A man without a wife
Like a computer without online

Having a wife will make me broke
Even though . I still broke
written By Nail Al -enzy

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[Serious Smile]

Even i don't know anything about English poetry

But the meaning is great ..

Keep up and continue writing

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[عطرالحروف]

Wonderful poem END stunning Nile

[عطرالحروف]

A true forgot tell accept traffic Bntdhar Jdidkalmtweida

[Against Gravity]

Huge ambition ,with some depression
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aren’t we all
??

amazing poem

i loved the beginning
but i didnt like the end
when you said that your thoughts feel lonely

thoughts dont feel?

maybe if you said
my thoughts being lonely
or being lonely with my thoughts
or i was alone with my thoughts trapped in my mind
seeking help
or make this line ( Calling mammy needs some help
after that

sending my dreams , go fly blind
:41:

anything rhymes with kind lol
see this site its useful if you want to make your poems rhyme

http://www.wordhippo.com/


one more thing , i dont know but i dont think its ok for an adult to say mammy im just saying
:mh318:
BTW where did you get that from? i mean american say mom and mommy and British say mum and mummy.
but mammy never heard of it
..
rate+ like:27::2:
keep it goin and keep it comin

[Serious Smile]

wow

you amazed me Ghada .. you have brief knowledge about poetries and how to make it or create it.

Do I need it in my major or it's just a hobby for u guys ?

wish to have great info form u about it

wish all the best :16:

[Against Gravity]

wow

you amazed me Ghada .. you have brief knowledge about poetries and how to make it or create it.

Do I need it in my major or it's just a hobby for u guys ?

wish to have great info form u about it

wish all the best :16:



thank you so much :29:
no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry

i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not
but i think it's nice to learn it .

our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much

[كيميائية للأبد]

Great
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[wintr song]

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[غرآم]

Wonderful��

Thank you ��

[prestigious]

لي باك بعد االمعهد للتعليق على ماخطت يداكم

[prestigious]

ان شاء الله

[Serious Smile]

thank you so much :29:
no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry

i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not
but i think it's nice to learn it .

our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much



I hope so ..

coz i have no idea about arabic poetry .. how is it possible to know the english

quite strange isn't it :14:

[ms.jasmien]

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i do not know in poetry
that much but your words
attracts the reader :34:

:17:keep on Nail keep on

[prestigious]

Even i don't know anything about English poetry

But the meaning is great ..

Keep up and continue writing

:16:
Thank you very much
for your comming
see you soon
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Wonderful poem END stunning Nile
thank you very much
You are so kind
:16:
A true forgot tell accept traffic Bntdhar Jdidkalmtweida

thank you very much
even if I understood
nothing
:35:
bntdhar -jdidkalmtweda
:16:

:44:
aren’t we all
??

amazing poem

i loved the beginning
but i didnt like the end
when you said that your thoughts feel lonely

thoughts dont feel?

maybe if you said
my thoughts being lonely
or being lonely with my thoughts
or i was alone with my thoughts trapped in my mind
seeking help
or make this line ( Calling mammy needs some help
after that

sending my dreams , go fly blind
:41:

anything rhymes with kind lol
see this site its useful if you want to make your poems rhyme

http://www.wordhippo.com/


one more thing , i dont know but i dont think its ok for an adult to say mammy im just saying
:mh318:
BTW where did you get that from? i mean american say mom and mommy and British say mum and mummy.
but mammy never heard of it
..
rate+ like:27::2:
keep it goin and keep it comin

hhhhh Actually
all what I want To give you what I was feeling about
I know that thoughts cannot feel
as human
(:
u can pick up the meaning
and thank you for corrcting me
even though I know that I did some mistakes
in order to give you the meaning
mammy<<<when you call your mothery very quickly
(:
I know it's mistake too
thank you for the sad rating
and for your lovely like

ok take this my little poem
Thee my problem And Give me the Rest,Give me the Rest I will give you the rest
(: no mistakes isn't


thank you so much :29:
no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry

i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not
but i think it's nice to learn it .

our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much


yes I asked the english
she told that she loves too
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Great
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gratefulness is you

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Wonderful��

Thank you ��
thanks is up To allah
and you
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I hope so ..

coz i have no idea about arabic poetry .. how is it possible to know the english

quite strange isn't it :14:
:16:

:11::24::18:

i do not know in poetry
that much but your words
attracts the reader :34:

:17:keep on Nail keep on

wow the attraction is you
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thank you very much
keep watching my Topics
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hi Prestigious

thank you for the sad rating

why its sad ?:40:

anyway i did some research and found out Irish people use the word (mammy) sometimes
its good to know that i guess thanks to u Prestigious
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[prestigious]

hi Prestigious



why its sad ?:40:

anyway i did some research and found out Irish people use the word (mammy) sometimes
its good to know that i guess thanks to u Prestigious
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your rate was planning to (way to go) lol

Anyway yes I found it too in Irish
And IT's kinda not exist in proper english that we study
No Do not say that
say Thanks is up to allah
and you
I have nothing to do with it
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you are more than welocme sister

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Eilėraštis nuostabus Jūs esate nuostabus

[prestigious]

Eilėraštis nuostabus Jūs esate nuostabus


tu sei la grande

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[Against Gravity]

way to go is american Idiom or expression means ( good job or great work or well done .... thats it:34::17:

[prestigious]

aha

I got it now

very sorry ghadah
mashallah your english is very good mashallah

I Have just written this poem to air my grievances

(: new idiom

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