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5 A second environmental cause of shyness in an individual may be one’s culture. In
a large study conducted in several nations, 40 percent of participants in the United States
rated themselves as shy, compared to 57 percent in Japan and 55 percent in Taiwan. Of the
countries participating in the study, the lowest percentage of shyness was found in Israel,
where the rate was 31 percent. Researchers Henderson and Zimbardo say, “One explanation
of the cultural difference between Japanese and Israelis lies in the way each culture deals
with attributing credit for success and blame for failure. In Japan, an individual’s
performance success is credited externally to parents, grandparents, teachers, coaches, and
others, while failure is entirely blamed on the person.” Therefore, Japanese learn not to take
risks in public and rely instead on group-shared decisions. “In Israel, the situation is entirely
reversed,” according to Henderson and Zimbardo. “Failure is externally attributed to parents,teachers, coaches, and friends, anti-Semitism, and other sources, while all performance
success is credited to the individual’s enterprise.” The consequence is that Israelis are free
to take risks since there is nothing to lose by trying and everything to gain (10).

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الحين انت لاحظ ان البرجراف الاول تكلم عن السبب الاول اللي هو البيولجي ولوتقرا البرجراف الثالث راح تلاحظ انه فصل البيولوجي عن الانيفارومنت لانه هنا يبي يعدد لك كذا سبب وشوف الكلمه الاخير اللي بالجراف لان بعدها بالبرجرافات الثلاثه راح يذكر اسباب تخص الانفايرومنت بس >>سوري ع الكتابه بالعربي


3 however, environment can, at least in some cases, triumph over biology. A shy
child may lose much of his or her shyness. On the other hand, many people who were not
shy as children become shy as adults, a fact that points to environment or experiential
c.auses

الله يوفقك لكل مافيه خير لك

كملي بارك الله فيك

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نجي للبرجراف السادس وبيكون السبب الثالث للانفايرومنت

6 In addition to family and culture, technology may play a role as well. In the United
States, the number of young people who report being shy has risen from 40 percent to 50
percent in recent years (10). The rising numbers of shy young people may be “due in part to
the growing dependence on non-human forms of communication, coming about as a result
of our huge advances in technology” (Payne, par. 4). Watching television, playing video
games, and surfing the Web have displaced recreational activities that involve social
interaction for many young people. Adults, too, are becoming more isolated as a result of
technology. Face-to-face interactions with bank tellers, gas station attendants, and store
clerks are no longer necessary because people can use machines to do their banking, fill
their gas tanks, and order merchandise. College students take online telecourses.
Telecommuters work at home, giving up daily contact with coworkers. Everyone texts, emails,
and converses anonymously in online chat rooms. As a result, people have less
opportunity to socialize in person, become increasingly awkward at it, and eventually start
avoiding it altogether. In short, they become shy.

[ندى العالم]

Surprising introduction إذا شفتي علاملات استفهام في المقدمة


Dramatic introduction دراما إذا فيه عن قبور أو جرايم أو أكشن أو ,,,,,مدري حسب فهمي

Funnel introduction إذا شفتي الجنرال ستستمنت والثيسسس ستيتمنت نفسس الشي أو تبدأ تفصل الموضوع مثل الكميرا على قولته انا باقي ألخبط فيهم بس ذا حسب فهمي أتمنى إني أفدتكم

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ونجي للبرجراف السابع وهنا راح تقابلنا كلمه من اللي المفروض تكونون حافظينها حق ال effect

7 While being shy has some negative consequences, it has positive aspects, too. For
one thing, it has been mentioned that shy people are good listeners (“Shyness”). 3
Furthermore, a university professor writing about his own shyness says, “Because of their
tendency toward self-criticism, shy people are often high achievers, and not just in solitary
activities like research and writing. Perhaps even more than the drive toward independent
achievement, shy people long to make connections to others, often through altruistic
behavior” (Benton).4

وبسبت الكلمه هذي راح يكون البرجراف السابع هو effect

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ونجي للبرجراف السابع وهنا راح تقابلنا كلمه من اللي المفروض تكونون حافظينها حق ال effect

7 While being shy has some negative consequences, it has positive aspects, too. For
one thing, it has been mentioned that shy people are good listeners (“Shyness”). 3
Furthermore, a university professor writing about his own shyness says, “Because of their
tendency toward self-criticism, shy people are often high achievers, and not just in solitary
activities like research and writing. Perhaps even more than the drive toward independent
achievement, shy people long to make connections to others, often through altruistic
behavior” (Benton).4

وبسبت الكلمه هذي راح يكون البرجراف السابع هو effect

اللي هي effect transition word

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نجي للبرجراف الاخير وهو الخاتمة راح تلاحظون ان كلمة جت بال thesis وتكررت فيها اللي هي cause والخاتمه راح تكون من ال suggest result or conseques لان فيه كلمه تدل على هالنوع وهي To sum up


8 To sum up, shyness has both genetic and environmental causes. Some people come
into the world shy, while others become shy as a result of their experiences in life. It
appears that most people have experienced shyness at some time in their lives, and recent
research indicates that the number of shy people is increasing. Therefore, if you are shy, you
have lots of company.

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والحين نرد نشيك على حلنا وفيه

introduction

cause 1(biology

transition البرجراف الثالث

cause 2 الانفايرومنت

cause 3 للانفايرومنت

cause 4للانفايرومنت

effect البرجراف السابع

conclusion


وبكذا تكون عندي الجدول b

أتمنى اكون عرفت اوصل المعلومه

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نجي للبرجراف الاخير وهو الخاتمة راح تلاحظون ان كلمة جت بال thesis وتكررت فيها اللي هي cause والخاتمه راح تكون من ال suggest solution لان فيه كلمه تدل على هالنوع وهي To sum up


8 To sum up, shyness has both genetic and environmental causes. Some people come
into the world shy, while others become shy as a result of their experiences in life. It
appears that most people have experienced shyness at some time in their lives, and recent
research indicates that the number of shy people is increasing. Therefore, if you are shy, you
have lots of company.

اذا حسب مافهمت block راح يكون كذا
introduction

cause1

transition paragraph

cause2
cause2
cause3
cause4
effect

conclusin

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اللي هي effect transition word

لا أقصد Effect structure words وهي :

the first effect-as aresult-consequently