[أم عمار]

Your dfraft is full of plagiarised texts. You need to try again. I advise you to see the recorded lectures and try again.

It is not acceptable at all to copy-paste material from the internet and claim that this is your project. This is plagiarism. Your plagiarism is from A to Z including the conclusion and the research question. You need to try again. Your topic is a collection of plagiarized texts (see attached file).

Plagiarism is a serious offence and if students are found guilty of plagiarism they will be liable to failing this course. I will give you one more chance to try again.


You have only one chance left. You have to submit your final draft next saturday (21 december). There will be no further feedback. Send the whole proposal in one email





هاذا كان رده مع ان الرد الاول هاذا هو



That is not bad; however, you need to present your proposal in the format we have discussed in the recorded lecture (lecture 1). That is to say, you need to have section for the abstractly and you then write the abstract for your proposal.

Then you move to the introduction and then write the introduction,. Then another section for the research question and so on and so forth.

You should have a separate section telling clearly what your research is about and so on.




بس لاني قمت اتفلسف وانسخ من النت بعض المقالات واضفتها وخربت على نفسي