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Being a broke Sad At night Great in the morning Huge ambition ,with some depression Play in the Garden ,lie on the Grass Looking at the sky, Counting the starts Calling mammy needs some help Take My Body its your help I'm a broke But Standing by Being upset before that night Going To bed without some wings My Thoughts feel lonely in my mind I need to make them having a wife Being a broke something easy Being without a wife driving me crazy A man without a wife Like a computer without online Having a wife will make me broke Even though . I still broke written By Nail Al -enzy :16::16::16::16::16: :16::16::16::16: :16::16::16: :16::16: :1: |
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Even i don't know anything about English poetry
But the meaning is great .. Keep up and continue writing :16: |
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Wonderful poem END stunning Nile
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A true forgot tell accept traffic Bntdhar Jdidkalmtweida
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:44: aren’t we all ?? amazing poem i loved the beginning but i didnt like the end when you said that your thoughts feel lonely thoughts dont feel? maybe if you said my thoughts being lonely or being lonely with my thoughts or i was alone with my thoughts trapped in my mind seeking help or make this line ( Calling mammy needs some help after that sending my dreams , go fly blind :41: anything rhymes with kind lol see this site its useful if you want to make your poems rhyme http://www.wordhippo.com/ one more thing , i dont know but i dont think its ok for an adult to say mammy im just saying :mh318: BTW where did you get that from? i mean american say mom and mommy and British say mum and mummy. but mammy never heard of it .. rate+ like:27::2: keep it goin and keep it comin |
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wow you amazed me Ghada .. you have brief knowledge about poetries and how to make it or create it. Do I need it in my major or it's just a hobby for u guys ? wish to have great info form u about it wish all the best :16: |
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thank you so much :29: no i just love english and everything about it and I have a passion for poetry i dont know about "poetry" if we have to study it?or not but i think it's nice to learn it . our bachelor degree is english language not english literature, so i guess we will not concentrate on poetry too much |
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Great
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Wonderful
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لي باك بعد االمعهد للتعليق على ماخطت يداكم
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ان شاء الله
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coz i have no idea about arabic poetry .. how is it possible to know the english quite strange isn't it :14: |
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:11::24::18: i do not know in poetry that much but your words attracts the reader :34: :17:keep on Nail keep on |
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for your comming see you soon :16::16: اقتباس:
You are so kind :16: اقتباس:
even if I understood nothing :35: bntdhar -jdidkalmtweda :16: اقتباس:
all what I want To give you what I was feeling about I know that thoughts cannot feel as human (: u can pick up the meaning and thank you for corrcting me even though I know that I did some mistakes in order to give you the meaning mammy<<<when you call your mothery very quickly (: I know it's mistake too thank you for the sad rating and for your lovely like ok take this my little poem Thee my problem And Give me the Rest,Give me the Rest I will give you the rest (: no mistakes isn't اقتباس:
she told that she loves too :13: اقتباس:
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and you :16: اقتباس:
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:16: thank you very much keep watching my Topics :3: |
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hi Prestigious
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why its sad ?:40: anyway i did some research and found out Irish people use the word (mammy) sometimes its good to know that i guess thanks to u Prestigious :21::11: |
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Anyway yes I found it too in Irish And IT's kinda not exist in proper english that we study No Do not say that say Thanks is up to allah and you I have nothing to do with it :29: you are more than welocme sister |
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Eilėraštis nuostabus Jūs esate nuostabus
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tu sei la grande :18: :30: :13: |
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way to go is american Idiom or expression means ( good job or great work or well done .... thats it:34::17:
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aha
I got it now very sorry ghadah mashallah your english is very good mashallah I Have just written this poem to air my grievances (: new idiom :16: |
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