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roqa 2013- 5- 31 12:30 AM
للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
بسم الرحمن الرحيم ...

نظرا للنجاح الذي حققه الموضوع في الصيفية الفائته ..

.http://www.ckfu.org/vb/t338453.html

وددت تكرار الفكرة هذه الصيفية وهي اني ساطرح موضوع مع بداية كل اسبوع ..اعطيكم العنوان وانتم تكتبوا في مهلة اسبوع كامل ..وبعدها يتم الاعلان عن اسم الفائز الذي سيجبر كل المشاركين على تقييمه ..
كما ستوجد العديد من المفاجات بإذن الله ..:17:

كما تلاحظون في الموضوع القديم لم تكن اختيارتي للعناوين عادية انما تتعمد على ذكر افعال بالماضي والمستقبل وليس الهدف صف جمل فقط ..

طبعا كتابة النص تكون بشروط معينة وفق هذه البنود :

اولا : ان لا يقل النص عن 5 اسطر .
ثانيا : ان لا يكون منقول .
ثالثا:سرد تفاصيل ممتعة ومدعمة للنص كرابط او صورة او مثال ونحو ذلك .


هنا تنبيهات قبل ان تكتب نصك ..

# حافظ على موقع الحروف الكبيرة والصغيرة .
#حافظ على زمن الافعال ..
#حافظ على تنسيق النص وترابط الجمل .
#واخيرا علامات الترقيم ومواضعها ...


اختيار الفائز : لايكون بالتصويت ..انما بالنص الاقل اخطاء ..والملاحظات اعلاه سيتم المحاسبة عليها ...

واخيرا هذا الموضوع مفتوح لجميع المستويات ..

ومضة : اللغة الانجليزية لا تعلم من قبل حفظ كلمات ..انما فهم الجمل قبل الكلمات وكتابة النصوص ستساعد على تحسين لغتكم بإذنه تعالى ....

عنوان موضوع هذا الاسبوع : !!What's the best book you read in your life and Why

prestigious 2013- 5- 31 01:12 AM
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Great Topic ..
ok I will Do it First.. ..:42:
: !!What's the best book you read in your life and Why

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http://www.hadaik.com/kleeja/uploads/13632040031.jpg

Alykum Aslam ...
This is My book .
Titled with
"The power of Thinking "
This book gives you the whole controlling about your thoughts.
It has been the most beneficial book To me for Months,Thus I got The whole management in my life,it Shows you that when you think of one Idea it comes to your mind two Actions ..(Positive and Negative) ..
And you can change your Action According to your Situations .
this book its sales has been increased , Over Two Years
Open-minded Not only How To think Independently,But will imrpove you capacity in holding things in your mind.
Finally,I'm Advising you ,To Read it excessively
one,two ,three and ...etc
Thank you Roqa ,Best Regards for you:icon1:

prestigious 2013- 5- 31 01:24 AM
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الله يذكر هاك الموضوع بالخير ،، :35:
كنا ثلاثي طموح ،، فتفرق الثلاثي وكلن عرف ذاته

QUEENالمتميزة 2013- 5- 31 10:55 AM
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Hi
This topic is very wonderful and very useful

Thanks alot my best friend Roqa
:21::2::16::1:

Dalal Khalid 2013- 5- 31 03:58 PM
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What's the best book you read in your life and Why

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-zNXsdsTg5P...+Alchemist.jpg

The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho
I have to say that I love this writer right now and this was my second book to read by him. It seems like everyone LOVED this book in Arabic and to me ...Well,I wasn't sure about it. I know that translation affects the quality of writing and that's why I decided to read it in English.
The depth of the thoughts in the book are insanely amazing, It will take you on a journey to explore yourself through the book. I know it doesn't make any sense why would I choose a novel to be my favorite book but I guess its what you take from the book and how much do you commune with the Idea that it's not just a story, It's reality.
I hope you read the book and enjoy it as much as I did.

And thank you for your topic darling <3 ~

nsayim 2013- 6- 1 12:00 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
?What's the best book you read in your life and Why

there is many book I liked, but my favorite is the book of" body language" Which was prepared by Abdul Razak al- Ahmad .it is learn me more information a but Movements of people link their feelings.
It tells you that the bodies never lie no matter how you try to hide your feelings, your movements , tone of your voice and your actions Expose you. It is an important book for me because it helps me to communicate with people better and As we all know When you communicating with people well you will take your place in their hearts and gain a lot of friends.

yuuki 2013- 6- 2 01:22 AM
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http://quirkygirlsread.files.wordpre...nte-cristo.jpg

My favorite book so far is The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas. I have read every genres of literature and found that this novel is a mosaic of almost all genres. It contains all elements of politics, society, history, crime, revenge, and even many Romeo and Juliette and Arabian Nights enchanted scenes. Also, I like it because it is published in the 19th century and this century along with the 18th are my favorite centuries in the western history, when reading the novel you get to imagine the setting, clothes, and manners of the people back then. Another thing, the characters are interesting especially the protagonist Edmund Dantes which I caught myself unconsciously trying to analyze his character and trying to figure out which characters I prefer. I was overwhelmed by emotions particularly at the ending. Moreover, as much as it’s a vengeance story, it is also about forgiveness and turning a new leaf. Finally, if I made you interested in it, I must tell you that summer is the right time for reading it because the novel contains 875 pages, it needs commitment.

"There is neither happiness nor unhappiness in this world; there is only the comparison of one state with another. Only a man who has felt ultimate despair is capable of feeling ultimate bliss"

nsayim 2013- 6- 7 11:48 PM
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مافي نص ثاني نكتبه هالأسبوع ؟؟:39:

roqa 2013- 6- 9 05:29 PM
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اعتذر عن التاخير بالفعل ..سيتم تحديد الفائز اليوم

وستكتمل المسابقة بإذن الله ..

السموحة كنت اخطط لشيء لكنه لم يحدث ..لذا سأتابع :17:

نصوصكم بالفعل رائعة ساعود اليوم للتعقيب على كل نص واعلان الفائز ...

كونوا بالقرب :16:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 02:58 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة prestigious (المشاركة 9060891)
Great Topic ..
ok I will Do it First.. ..:42:
: !!What's the best book you read in your life and Why

-------





http://www.hadaik.com/kleeja/uploads/13632040031.jpg

Alykum Aslam ...
This is My book .
Titled with
"The power of Thinking "
This book gives you the whole controlling about your thoughts.
It has been the most beneficial book To me for Months,Thus I got The whole management in my life,it Shows you that when you think of one Idea it comes to your mind two Actions ..(Positive and Negative) ..
And you can change your Action According to your Situations .
this book its sales has been increased , Over Two Years
Open-minded Not only How To think Independently,But will imrpove you capacity in holding things in your mind.
Finally,I'm Advising you ,To Read it excessively
one,two ,three and ...etc
Thank you Roqa ,Best Regards for you:icon1:
Amazing Naail
nice book ,u told me about it before and i read it
:21: that's book gave me huge pour to live in this life ..some thing in that book made me more control to my life ..:17:

OK now about your text >>imm i think u don't have any mistake just one:42:

surly u don't mean

(( improve )) :27:

but engeneral really amazing job :21::3:

اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة prestigious (المشاركة 9060953)
الله يذكر هاك الموضوع بالخير ،، :35:
كنا ثلاثي طموح ،، فتفرق الثلاثي وكلن عرف ذاته
ثلاثي طموح ..وما أجملها من كلمة أعادت لي ذكريات رائعة مع أجمل صحبة معكم :1:

أتمنى أن نجتمع على محبة وعلم ..:17:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 03:04 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة QUEENالمتميزة (المشاركة 9062096)
Hi
This topic is very wonderful and very useful

Thanks alot my best friend Roqa
:21::2::16::1:
Honey ,,what a nice surprise

i‘m very glad to see u in my subject

and i will more happy when i see your text

share with us ..:27:

:16: U R my best friend

yuuki 2013- 6- 10 03:58 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة roqa (المشاركة 9122759)
Amazing Naail
nice book ,u told me about it before and i read it
:21: that's book gave me huge pour to live in this life ..some thing in that book made me more control to my life ..:17:

OK now about your text >>imm i think u don't have any mistake just one:42:

surly u don't mean

(( improve )) :27:

but engeneral really amazing job :21::3:



ثلاثي طموح ..وما أجملها من كلمة أعادت لي ذكريات رائعة مع أجمل صحبة معكم :1:

أتمنى أن نجتمع على محبة وعلم ..:17:
You have only found one mistake ?!! That's weird because I found so many in grammar, structure, punctuations .. Not to sound cocky but I've to say it for his own good and not just him all the others also have fatal mistakes especially the last line where he said " one, two, three ". Prestigious u should've said " once, twice .. Again and over again" or something like that. And I noticed u capitalise a lot of letters that u shouldn't but I know that's your style of writing but if u would accept my advice u would stop this way of writing cuz it's very confusing u see in literature we capitalise words that aren't names to personify it, and when u do that It's like u personify it or make it something in itself like a being u see why it's confusing?.
I hope I made this clear cuz I'm writing through my stupid BB so forgive any mistakes.

roqa 2013- 6- 10 04:41 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Dalal Khalid (المشاركة 9063002)
What's the best book you read in your life and Why

http://3.bp.blogspot.com/-zNXsdsTg5P...+Alchemist.jpg

The Alchemist by Paulo Coelho
I have to say that I love this writer right now and this was my second book to read by him. It seems like everyone LOVED this book in Arabic and to me ...Well,I wasn't sure about it. I know that translation affects the quality of writing and that's why I decided to read it in English.
The depth of the thoughts in the book are insanely amazing, It will take you on a journey to explore yourself through the book. I know it doesn't make any sense why would I choose a novel to be my favorite book but I guess its what you take from the book and how much do you commune with the Idea that it's not just a story, It's reality.
I hope you read the book and enjoy it as much as I did.

And thank you for your topic darling <3 ~

Welcome baby :29:

PAULO COELHO

Actually i heard about that writer ,and i hop to read for him that book >>it seems so exsited and usefu:21:l

i read for him many Judgment and sermons but in Arabic


ok now >>>let me put some comments on your text

* and this was my second book to read by him
correct in my opinion:and that was my second book i read it to him


*It seems like everyone LOVED this book in Arabic and to me
corrction i think when you say like this it will be beter:
It seems like everyone LOVED this book in Arabic and English ,also me


*The depth of the thoughts in the book are insanely amazing, It will take you on a journey to explore yourself through the book.
I like this phrese :21:

* commune!!

OK good text and nice sharing :21::29:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 04:50 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة yuuki (المشاركة 9123081)
you have only found one mistake ?!! That's weird because i found so many in grammar, structure, punctuations .. Not to sound cocky but i've to say it for his own good and not just him all the others also have fatal mistakes especially the last line where he said " one, two, three ". Prestigious u should've said " once, twice .. Again and over again" or something like that. And i noticed u capitalise a lot of letters that u shouldn't but i know that's your style of writing but if u would accept my advice u would stop this way of writing cuz it's very confusing u see in literature we capitalise words that aren't names to personify it, and when u do that it's like u personify it or make it something in itself like a being u see why it's confusing?.
I hope i made this clear cuz i'm writing through my stupid bb so forgive any mistakes.
نصايحك عالعين والراس ..بالعكس أنا ارحب يأي نقد ..

وبالفعل أنا قلت أني سأحاسب على علامات الترقيم وكبر الأحرف وصغرها ..

أخذتها بالحسبان ولاحظتها لكن لم ادونها ..

أنا طالبة مثلي مثلكم :29: وبما انك مستوى ثامن فانا أرحب بأي نصيحة منك ..

موضوع العام كنا نتساعد باكتشاف الأخطاء لم أكن وحدي ..لأننا بالنهاية كلنا طلبة ولايوجد معنا معلمين ..وهالشي يلي جعل الموضوع يتطور ..بل اني وضعت مساعدة لي بالموضوع بتنقيح النصوص ..

ودي واحترامي ..:16:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 05:28 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nsayim (المشاركة 9065008)
?What's the best book you read in your life and Why

there is many book I liked, but my favorite is the book of" body language" Which was prepared by Abdul Razak al- Ahmad .it is learn me more information a but Movements of people link their feelings.
It tells you that the bodies never lie no matter how you try to hide your feelings, your movements , tone of your voice and your actions Expose you. It is an important book for me because it helps me to communicate with people better and As we all know When you communicating with people well you will take your place in their hearts and gain a lot of friends.
Hello

you are welcome

:17::21:((i am very like any book talks about (( body language

ok you have some mistakes sweety

*many book
many books

*my favorite is the book
mu favorite book is

*.it is learning me more information
These books give me more information

*a but Movements of people link their feelings
And that through the movements of people and linking their feelings

* Expose you
Will reveal you


* and As we all know When you communicating with people well you will take your place in their hearts and gain a lot of friends.

i liked :21:

so finally you have many mistakes in punctuation

good job honey :21::29:

Turning point 2013- 6- 10 05:29 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة prestigious (المشاركة 9060953)
الله يذكر هاك الموضوع بالخير ،، :35:
كنا ثلاثي طموح ،، فتفرق الثلاثي وكلن عرف ذاته
منجد كنا ولا اروع ...


روكا ... لم اعد متفرغه كالسابق ...
احاول ان الحق بكم .. لكن اشرافي ع الصيفي ..
وقراءاتي تسرقني ..

اتمنى العوده كالسابق .. لكني مهارة الكتابه سهلة بعض الشيء بالنسبه لي ..

اود تعلم المحادثه ... وسأبحث عن طرق اجادتها ..

اعذريني ياصديقتي العزيزه ..:16::16::16:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 05:38 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Turning point (المشاركة 9123657)
منجد كنا ولا اروع ...


روكا ... لم اعد متفرغه كالسابق ...
احاول ان الحق بكم .. لكن اشرافي ع الصيفي ..
وقراءاتي تسرقني ..

اتمنى العوده كالسابق .. لكني مهارة الكتابه سهلة بعض الشيء بالنسبه لي ..

اود تعلم المحادثه ... وسأبحث عن طرق اجادتها ..

اعذريني ياصديقتي العزيزه ..:16::16::16:
معذورة ياقلبي ..أنا أكثر وحده عارفه مشاغلك الله يعطيكي العافية ..

بالنسبة للمحادثة عندي هالموقع نصحني به أحد الأصدقاء..بصراحة هجرته لضيق وقتي لكن متى ماحبيتي تدخلي أدخلي معاكي نتشجع مع بعض ..
http://www.expenglish.com/chat/

عبارة عن ملتقى انجليش كامل أنا مالي فيه ..كان همي المحادثة ..في جزء منه عبارة عن شات وصوت ..يجمع جميع الأقطاب تستطيعي التحدث بالمايك وطرح مايحلو لك والمناقشة أيضا ..يوجد طلبة ومعلمين ومفتوح 24 ساعة ..:17:

وهنا حياك الله بأي وقت ..

roqa 2013- 6- 10 05:54 AM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة yuuki (المشاركة 9071505)

http://quirkygirlsread.files.wordpre...nte-cristo.jpg

My favorite book so far is The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas. I have read every genres of literature and found that this novel is a mosaic of almost all genres. It contains all elements of politics, society, history, crime, revenge, and even many Romeo and Juliette and Arabian Nights enchanted scenes. Also, I like it because it is published in the 19th century and this century along with the 18th are my favorite centuries in the western history, when reading the novel you get to imagine the setting, clothes, and manners of the people back then. Another thing, the characters are interesting especially the protagonist Edmund Dantes which I caught myself unconsciously trying to analyze his character and trying to figure out which characters I prefer. I was overwhelmed by emotions particularly at the ending. Moreover, as much as it’s a vengeance story, it is also about forgiveness and turning a new leaf. Finally, if I made you interested in it, I must tell you that summer is the right time for reading it because the novel contains 875 pages, it needs commitment.

"There is neither happiness nor unhappiness in this world; there is only the comparison of one state with another. Only a man who has felt ultimate despair is capable of feeling ultimate bliss"

It seems so nice and contain many information .. but its too long and my time in this vocation so short ,i have many activities ..


mashalla ..

:27:you are good writer ,may be cuz you are in level 8 and youre studying is regularly

"There is neither happiness nor unhappiness in this world; there is only the comparison of one state with another. Only a man who has felt ultimate despair is capable of feeling ultimate bliss"

i liked :21:

your text is the best :17::21:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 06:08 AM
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بصراحة استمتعت بالكتب أكثر من النصوص نفسها ..عطيتونا خلفية حلوة بهالموضوع عن أهم الكتب ..

أكرر اعتذاري في التأخر بتنقيح النصوص .وذلك لأسباب خاصة ..


الأن ..دعوني أعلن عن اسم الفائز ..

كما ذكرت اختياري للفائز يكون بالشروط المعروفة وأولها : الأقل أخطاء ..

والفائز لهذا الأسبوع ...

:16:

:16:

:16:

العضوة ((yuuki))

Congratulations


http://www2.0zz0.com/2013/06/10/03/163739255.jpeg
بصراحة نصك كان الأفضل ولاهانوا البقية ..

الالتزام بجميع الشروط من علامات الترقيم ومواقع الأفعال من حيث الزمن وصحة الكلمات ..ولا أنسى اكسسوارات الموضوع من رابط وصورة أيضا ..


ألف مبرووك :3:

والأن هديتنا المتواضعة تقييم مني ومن جميع المشتركين ..:29:
http://www2.0zz0.com/2013/06/10/03/113397228.jpeg


أي نقاش أي استفسار أرحب به ..كي نفهم سويا اسس الكتابة ونزدهر في هالمجال ..

prestigious 2013- 6- 10 12:09 PM
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ألف مبارك يوكي ،، تستحق الفوز بالفعل
وشكراً روكا،، وبنتظار نصك التالي .:31:

nsayim 2013- 6- 10 01:54 PM
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شكرا شكرا roqa:16:
كنت محتاجة مثل هالموضوع عشان اطور من نفسي وشكرا على الملاحظات القيمه:1:
والف مبروك للفائز:16::16:
اتمنى استمرارية الموضوع:33:

roqa 2013- 6- 10 08:35 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
انا اليوم جدا سعيدة بالنتايج ...:29:

والف مبروك للجميع :16:

ومن هذا المنطلق عنوان هالاسبوع رح يكون ..

The best moment in your life

يالله جيبوا كل الاعياد هههه مسموح :17:

nsayim 2013- 6- 10 08:54 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
مبروك النجاح.. لي عوده إن شاء الله :16::1:

Fleur_Mal 2013- 6- 11 02:30 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة yuuki (المشاركة 9071505)

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My favorite book so far is The Count of Monte Cristo by Alexandre Dumas. I have read every genres of literature and found that this novel is a mosaic of almost all genres. It contains all elements of politics, society, history, crime, revenge, and even many Romeo and Juliette and Arabian Nights enchanted scenes. Also, I like it because it is published in the 19th century and this century along with the 18th are my favorite centuries in the western history, when reading the novel you get to imagine the setting, clothes, and manners of the people back then. Another thing, the characters are interesting especially the protagonist Edmund Dantes which I caught myself unconsciously trying to analyze his character and trying to figure out which characters I prefer. I was overwhelmed by emotions particularly at the ending. Moreover, as much as it’s a vengeance story, it is also about forgiveness and turning a new leaf. Finally, if I made you interested in it, I must tell you that summer is the right time for reading it because the novel contains 875 pages, it needs commitment.

"There is neither happiness nor unhappiness in this world; there is only the comparison of one state with another. Only a man who has felt ultimate despair is capable of feeling ultimate bliss"
I have been searching for it in every Jarir bookstore i could find with no luck :24: but i still got the The Three Musketeers, hopefully i will have time to read it after my exams in Ramadan. btw, can u tell me in which bookstore u found it?

have a great holiday everyone and if you took the summer term this year like me then good luck on ur exams.

nsayim 2013- 6- 12 06:16 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
The best moment in your life
My life is a mixture of Happiness and sorrows.This is the nature of life but always the moment of Happiness Has a beautiful taste.The Moments of happiness is one of the most beautiful moments of life. Maybe there are several causes of happiness, but always remains for the moment's dose not forgets it'' the best moment in your life''. For me my best moment in my life when I meeting my family. That moment make me feel happy and safety. Well I hope to visit my family soon and spend most beautiful moments.

prestigious 2013- 6- 12 02:32 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
The Best Moment in my life is when i decided to buy a new book ,its name was a Retired Diary
Which was the Fisrt bookThat I've bought in whole my life..
Yes I did Buy some books ..but they were only acadmic or related to English Learning .
This Book Showed me a lot of things that i did not know ...and it was my starting point to (Cultural Field )
I'm Greatful To Allah ..that Gave me this Step in my life.

prestigious 2013- 6- 12 03:15 PM
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Roqa Show us yours
:17:
and make a poke for Turning point if she wanna participate with us
good nsaym
Roqa Correct me and for all players O.k


yuuki 2013- 6- 12 03:30 PM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة roqa (المشاركة 9123781)
It seems so nice and contain many information .. but its too long and my time in this vocation so short ,i have many activities ..


mashalla ..

:27:you are good writer ,may be cuz you are in level 8 and youre studying is regularly

"There is neither happiness nor unhappiness in this world; there is only the comparison of one state with another. Only a man who has felt ultimate despair is capable of feeling ultimate bliss"

i liked :21:

your text is the best :17::21:
Yes sorry I get carried away when I talk about a book. Enjoy your short vacation I hope my text didn't ruin it lol. U have to specify the limit of the sentences so we don't bother you.

Thank you for picking me as winner, I won't participate again becuase to be quite frank as u were with me, I see that our judge lacks "the skill to criticise" I saw many big mistakes u didn't correct it, u even liked sentences with mistakes in it, not to mention that u wrote some mistakes yourself.

I do admire your courage to open a competetion like this and be the leader, I hope u participate in it so u'll benefit as others.

Thanks again

yuuki 2013- 6- 12 03:39 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Fleur_Mal (المشاركة 9137079)


I have been searching for it in every Jarir bookstore i could find with no luck :24: but i still got the The Three Musketeers, hopefully i will have time to read it after my exams in Ramadan. btw, can u tell me in which bookstore u found it?

have a great holiday everyone and if you took the summer term this year like me then good luck on ur exams.
gladly .. i bought it from al 3bekan at Dhahran mall so check it there and have a good read.

yuuki 2013- 6- 12 03:47 PM
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اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة prestigious (المشاركة 9142004)
The Best Moment in my life is when i decided to buy a new book ,its name was a Retired Diary
Which was the Fisrt bookThat I've bought in whole my life..
Yes I did Buy some books ..but they were only acadmic or related to English Learning .
This Book Showed me a lot of things that i did not know ...and it was my starting point to (Cultural Field )
I'm Greatful To Allah ..that Gave me this Step in my life.
You're so stubborn hhhhhhhh I wonder if in exam papers u do like this? "Capitalise letters" u'll lose grades

prestigious 2013- 6- 12 03:54 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
لا يوكي انا اكتب متعمد كذا ما ألتزم بالطريقة الاكاديميه
:21:وشكراً على ملاحظاتك..

yuuki 2013- 6- 12 04:07 PM
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But ... I mean .. Even in none acadamec .. Aaaaaaa222 have it your way

Fleur_Mal 2013- 6- 15 08:08 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة yuuki (المشاركة 9142191)
gladly .. i bought it from al 3bekan at Dhahran mall so check it there and have a good read.
every time i go there, someone from my family is nagging me to hurry up, so no wonder i didn't find it. it's so annoying.
anyway, i already planned to go today to check some books for American Lit. course :29:
thank u:16:

prestigious 2013- 6- 17 01:58 AM
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This topic won't be closed........
:16:

roqa 2013- 6- 17 09:57 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
The best moment in my life

May be we have many happy and special days in our lives .But moment ,that is rarely.
For me my best moment in my life when i finshed "Al Hajj" .I cann't forget that moment ,I feel i born again,strange and wonderful feeling , That was like when muslims victory in one of the battles,or when the paraints were happy in coming a new baby at the first time .
I ask my God to repait that moment in all my healthful. you feel the illness is nice ,you will happy when you
tired,and you will feel closer to God whithout sins and trantgresions

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roqa 2013- 6- 17 10:11 PM
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I finished from my text ..any one can corrct it if he can ..

Or find any mistake ,i will so happy :17:

And now i want to corrct the texts for all ..

roqa 2013- 6- 17 11:20 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة nsayim (المشاركة 9140813)
he best moment in your life
My life is a mixture of Happiness and sorrows.This is the nature of life but always the moment of Happiness Has a beautiful taste.The Moments of happiness is one of the most beautiful moments of life. Maybe there are several causes happiness, but always remains for the moment's dose not forgets it'' the best moment in your life''. For me my best moment in my life when I meeting my family. That moment make me feel happy and safety. Well I hope to visit my family soon and spend most beautiful moments.
Of life # in life

Of happiness# for happiness

Forgets it # forget


Moment's# moment

Make me feel and happy safety # make me happy feeling and safety.

Well I hope to visit my family soon and spend most beautiful moments.[/

I hope for you best moments with your family :27::17:

زمورد 2013- 6- 18 12:18 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
Thanks so much on the topic

I write my text . I wat you correct it . Ok




My best moment in my life when I see my best friend is married. I feel that I lost a beautiful thing but in the same time iam very happy because she is starting a new life. I wish to her happy life .





I know my text is short.
But iam trying write a good text .:21::21:

nsayim 2013- 6- 20 09:54 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة roqa (المشاركة 9165283)
Of life # in life

Of happiness# for happiness

Forgets it # forget


Moment's# moment

Make me feel and happy safety # make me happy feeling and safety.

Well I hope to visit my family soon and spend most beautiful moments.[/

I hope for you best moments with your family :27::17:
thank you roqa:1: for Correction my mistakes

i am very happy:16:

خديجه سلمان 2013- 7- 3 04:42 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
يسلمو

prestigious 2013- 7- 3 07:26 PM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
I have no best moment in my life ...Too bad (huh
I hope I can find my ego
Roqa Where are you we missed you


:16:

roqa 2013- 7- 4 02:10 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة زمورد (المشاركة 9165498)
Thanks so much on the topic

I write my text . I wat you correct it . Ok




My best moment in my life when I see my best friend is married. I feel that I lost a beautiful thing but in the same time iam very happy because she is starting a new life. I wish to her happy life .





I know my text is short.
But iam trying write a good text .:21::21:
Mashalla so good ...:21:..

.Keep going honey ..and you should proud in your begening

:16:

roqa 2013- 7- 4 02:27 AM
رد: للموسم الثاني مسابقة افضل نص انجليزي استمتعوا معنا ...
 
My time is so short .,,i cann't complet this subject for many reaons for me

.I was hoping that we develop our English skills ..

But some times there are many things entring to our lives and chang it ..

We can't say please stope it .becase it's strongest ..

I'm so proud we have cliver students like you guys ,i was interisting so much ..

Thank you ,,and i'm so sorry :16:
With my love , all respect ,,and best wishes:16::004:


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