[ مذاكرة جماعية ] : درب a+بإذن الله ..مادة المقال..

[abady alomari]

ايه ذكر الفاصله

وقال المحاضرات مهمه الاربع الاخير

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[عزيزة نفس!]

الحين التعاريف بس اذاكر اللي محدده الدكتور بالمباشره 3

ويعطيكم العافيييييييييه و الله ييسر كل اموركم

[ابو الفيصل]

(1)
A teacher has an important role that should never be taken lightly. They help inspire children to be the best that they can be. For a lot of children their teacher is the only decent role model that they may ever encounter in life. Also, parents have a sense of relief knowing that when their children are at school the teacher will keep them safe. In addition, there are several children who only get the support that they need from their teacher. A preschool teacher's job consists of being a role model, making sure the children are safe, and being supportive.
(2)
First of all, a teacher should always be a good role model. Children will imitate adults, so when they see that their teacher is practicing healthy procedures then they will do the same. It is important that the teacher is on time, finish what was started, and keep their word. Because when children see this, they start to have the mentality that if my teacher can do it then so can I. Also, being calm and patient when children are being very disobedient is a must. A lot of children are used to their parents yelling at them 24/7. When their teacher talks in a calm and assertive manner then they will start to understand that yelling is not the answer.
(3)
Secondly, a teacher should always keep their children safe. The environment should be spacious enough for when the children play it will help in reducing injuries. The teacher should incorporate games and books that help children in learning safety procedures. The teacher should communicate openly with the children about safe practices. More importantly, there should always be strict supervision.
(4)
Thirdly, a teacher should be very supportive of her children. Being supportive helps the children understand theirselves and others. The teacher should always encourage and praise her children. This results in the kids having high self-esteem. There are so many children that do not get the support that they need in their families. Because the teacher gives them that support that they need, it can change children's lives for the better.
(5)
In essence, teachers have an extremely blessed job. For the most part they are the ones that help children determine their potential. They always have little eyes watching everything that they do, so it is important that the teacher does everything correct as much as possible. Teachers are responsible for keeping their children safe at all times. It is gratifying for the teacher when they know that they will help at least on child if not more throughout their lifetime of teaching.

اولا الف شكر بدون ذكر اسماء لكل من شارك او رد و وذل جهد
تشكرون عليه وفالكم التوفيق

حسب فهمي
عدد البراقرافات في المقال هذا 5 كما هو مرقم

Which paragraph is the introductory paragraph
الجواب اللون الازرق اللي هو البراقراف الجزءالاول رقم 1

Which paragraph is the main body
الجواب ما لون بالاحمر

Which paragraph is the conclusion
الخاتمه

Which one is the thesis statement
الستيت منت



What is the general statements of the essay
الموضوع العام ماخوذ من اول جمل من البراقراق الاول
The role of preschool teacher



حسب فهمي وشرح الاخت لوفلي

اي احد عنده اضافه او فيه غلط يقتبس ويوضح ويشرح
شكرا

[queen night100]

يالبى قلوبكم جعل السعادة في كل دروبكم "هذا العلوم الزينه"تكفون كملو شرحكم

[)ali(]

الأسئله اللى في المرفقات أنا أشوف أنها أسئله روعه واستفدة منها كثير

وحبيت أقدمها لكم

[ابو الفيصل]

The main parts of an essay are

The introduction

the main body

and the conclusion

اي مقال يتكون من ثلاثة اجزاء مقدمه وصلب الموضوع الخاتمه

[وفاءٍ للعلم]

في شي ذكره الدكتور بالمباشره الثالثه ماتطرقتوا له اخاف تنسون ،،، ااي هو التايب كولوجن او التايب كونتروكشن والبرنوان رفيرس الضمير وش يرجع له والفاينل كولوجن وقال اي شي يتعلق باستراتيجياات المقال ، يعني يمكن ف اشياء زياده ماقالها انتبهوا لها،،، انا عن نفسي مو عارفه وشو يعني بالتايب كولوجن او التايب كونتروكشن والفاينل وشوووووو ذيلي ؟؟؟ هدا تابع الجزء الثاني من الاسئله

[Another day]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ابو الفيصل

(1)
A teacher has an important role that should never be taken lightly. They help inspire children to be the best that they can be. For a lot of children their teacher is the only decent role model that they may ever encounter in life. Also, parents have a sense of relief knowing that when their children are at school the teacher will keep them safe. In addition, there are several children who only get the support that they need from their teacher. A preschool teacher's job consists of being a role model, making sure the children are safe, and being supportive.
(2)
First of all, a teacher should always be a good role model. Children will imitate adults, so when they see that their teacher is practicing healthy procedures then they will do the same. It is important that the teacher is on time, finish what was started, and keep their word. Because when children see this, they start to have the mentality that if my teacher can do it then so can I. Also, being calm and patient when children are being very disobedient is a must. A lot of children are used to their parents yelling at them 24/7. When their teacher talks in a calm and assertive manner then they will start to understand that yelling is not the answer.
(3)
Secondly, a teacher should always keep their children safe. The environment should be spacious enough for when the children play it will help in reducing injuries. The teacher should incorporate games and books that help children in learning safety procedures. The teacher should communicate openly with the children about safe practices. More importantly, there should always be strict supervision.
(4)
Thirdly, a teacher should be very supportive of her children. Being supportive helps the children understand theirselves and others. The teacher should always encourage and praise her children. This results in the kids having high self-esteem. There are so many children that do not get the support that they need in their families. Because the teacher gives them that support that they need, it can change children's lives for the better.
(5)
In essence, teachers have an extremely blessed job. For the most part they are the ones that help children determine their potential. They always have little eyes watching everything that they do, so it is important that the teacher does everything correct as much as possible. Teachers are responsible for keeping their children safe at all times. It is gratifying for the teacher when they know that they will help at least on child if not more throughout their lifetime of teaching.

اولا الف شكر بدون ذكر اسماء لكل من شارك او رد و وذل جهد
تشكرون عليه وفالكم التوفيق

حسب فهمي
عدد البراقرافات في المقال هذا 5 كما هو مرقم

Which paragraph is the introductory paragraph
الجواب اللون الازرق اللي هو البراقراف الجزءالاول رقم 1

Which paragraph is the main body
الجواب ما لون بالاحمر

Which paragraph is the conclusion
الخاتمه

Which one is the thesis statement
الستيت منت



What is the general statements of the essay
الموضوع العام ماخوذ من اول جمل من البراقراق الاول
The role of preschool teacher



حسب فهمي وشرح الاخت لوفلي

اي احد عنده اضافه او فيه غلط يقتبس ويوضح ويشرح
شكرا

دام جبتوا هنا قطعه خلونا نشرح عليها اللي فهمناه من المحاضرات
نبدأ بالمقدمه ليش اخترنا الجمله general statement لان الthesis فيها كلمة role ومكرره بالبرجراف حق المقدمه كذا مره فتعبر الكلمه هذي هي الtopic اي الmain idea ونروح لبداية المقدمه وندور على جملة الكلمة role فيها وراح تكون هي الجنرال
واتوقع المقدمه من النوع funnel عاد اللي يشوف انه غيركذا يوضح ومن الthesis عرفنا عدد البراجرافات البودي وهي ثلاثه
نجي للخاتمه فيها تنبأ (aprediction) لان في القطعه they will help
هذا اللي عندي من اضافه

[ادب]

وانواع الثيسس وكيف تكون الثيسس قوية او ضعيفة وذكر مثال عليها
ليت احد يشرحها لنا هنا

[ابو الفيصل]

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