استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية

[غزيّل الريم]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hebaf

when i born first baby.......

I feel happy and scared at the same time. I am waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering how it looks my child? Is she same look like me or like her father, his skin is white or brown .. At the time entered the nurse tells me you have guests,I used to enter my mother every now and then, if the nurse carrying my baby and give me him as the most beautiful that day

When i had my first baby

i felt happy and scared at the same time. i was waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering what it is going to look like ! is it going to look like me or its father, its skin, is it white or brown ? at that time, the nurse entered and told me that i have guests
i used to enter my mother every now and then
when the nurse carried my baby and gave it to me, that was the most beautiful day in my life

^

اللي بالرمادي تركيبة الجملة صحيحة .. لكن مااعتقد انك كتبتيها زي ما قصدتي ..
اكتبيها لنا بالعربي خن نشوف

واذا فيه شي كتبته انا وهو غلط علميني .. لأن حاولت اكتب اللي بغيتي تقولينه

و ع فكرة : استخدمت it لأن مرة كتبتي مؤنث ومرة مذكر .. ف كتبت ع اساس انك ما تدرين وش جنسه

[Nasser.a]

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

what a nice topic , thanks roqa , we need to improve our language and get more vocabulary skills .

guys , we must kick the shyness out of our life , we here to LEARN .



*** I'll be back ***

[إشراقة ضوء]

فكرة روووعة

بحاول أكتب مع أني أخاف من هالخطووة

[mman200]

Today I’ll go to Makah, see you later

I’ll come back in Sunday

[بدويه]

I will sharing some of my feeling in my best day of my life and I hope there are many days still I have under (best days of my life)


When I graduated from secondary school, we had a graduation day, All of us had particular clothes and there was a programe for that day.
Everyone had different hope but all had the same feeling (Happyness), Our teachers & friends had glitter of joy on there eyes and have alot of hopes & dreaming of a wonderful future.
It's great day but I don't know it's the last time to see my friends (I am praying for them to be fine and have a greatful life with success and happyness)


Really, I'll never forget that day from my memory( forever ).

[prestigious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hebaf

I whant to enjoy

want

[prestigious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hebaf

when i born first baby.......

I feel happy and scared at the same time. I am waiting in my room at hospital, wondering how it looks like my child? is she the same as me or like her father, his skin is white or brown .. At the time entered the nurse tells me you have guests,I used to enter my mother every now and then, if the nurse carrying my baby and give me him as the most beautiful that day

I felt happy and acared at the same time i'm waiting in my room At the hospital wondering how my baby looks like is she the same as me or like her father her skin is it a white or brown at that time came the nurse and told me you have guests i used to visited my mother every single day if the nurse is carrying my baby and gives me my own baby . that day it was best day of my life


تم عمل اضافات لها بالطريقه الصحيحه

[prestigious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بدويه

I will sharing some of my feelings in my best day of my life and I hope there are many days still I have under (best days of my life)


When I graduated from secondary school, we had a graduation day, All of us had particular clothes and there was a programe for that day.
Everyone had different hope but all had the same feeling (Happyness), Our teachers & friends had glitter of joy on there eyes and have alot of hopes & dreaming of a wonderful future.
It's great day but I don't know it's the last time to see my friends (I am praying for them to be fine and have a greatful life with success and happyness)


Really, I'll never forget that day from my memory( forever ).

particular- special
alot - a lot
last time to see my friends = it was the last time i saw my friends

[prestigious]

اخواني تصحيحي للأعضاء لايعني ان لديهم اخطاء

بالفعل طريقة الكلام والكتابه صحيحه
وحتى ان وجد اخطاء فقد صححتها بما أعرفه هذا والله اعلم
لكن انا وضعت افضل تعبيرات لكي يفهمها القارئ بارك الله فيكم

[F!x]

I used to enter my mother every now and then
كنت بأنتظار دخول أمي بين الحين وألأخر
قوقل صار حوسه ماضبطها معي هل مرا