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[prestigious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hebaf

I used to enter my mother every now and then
كنت بأنتظار دخول أمي بين الحين وألأخر
قوقل صار حوسه ماضبطها معي هل مرا

I was waiting my mother to come to me At that time
i was looking forward to see my mother visiting me

[F!x]

I feel happy and scared at the same time. I am waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering how it looks my child? Is she same look like me or like her father, his skin is white or brown .. At the time entered the nurse tells me you have guests,I was waiting my mother to come to me At that time, if the nurse carrying my baby and give me him as the most beautiful that day

[F!x]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شمالي بطل

I was waiting my mother to come to me At that time
i was looking forward to see my mother visiting me

Thank you for helping me

[طــــلال]

heba nice paragraph


Iwill vote for you

GO

[F!x]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غزيّل الريم

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its i was , not were

were
^
ماضي are
we are talking = we were talking
they are eating = they were eating
are you sleeping ? = were you sleeping ? l

was
^
ماضي is
بس استثناء بسيط لما تجين تتكلمين عن نفسك انتي لحالك .. تقولين i was

والباقي نفس الطريقة
he is eating = he was eating
she is dreaming = she was dreaming
it is good = it was good


Hebaf

your language is very very good but u need to improve your grammar
you have to know when you can use the past and present

i will rewrite your paragraph and you will read and learn from your mistakes , wait for me

thank you very much ...you such good friend
many advice we can not get it this days

[m4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hebaf

I feel happy and scared at the same time. I am waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering how it looks my child? Is she same look like me or like her father, his skin is white or brown .. At the time entered the nurse tells me you have guests,I was waiting my mother to come to me At that time, if the nurse carrying my baby and give me him as the most beautiful that day

How are you Hepooo?

See what I colored in red please and try to fix them.

Good luck

[prestigious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة m4me

how are you hepooo?

See what i colored in red please and try to fix them.

Good luck

ارجعي لردي بصفحه رقم 13 صححته

[m4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شمالي بطل

i felt happy and acared at the same time i'm waiting in my room at the hospital wondering how my baby looks like is she the same as me or like her father her skin is it a white or brown at that time came the nurse and told me you have guests i used to visited my mother every single day if the nurse is carrying my baby and gives me my own baby . That day it was best day of my life


تم عمل اضافات لها بالطريقه الصحيحه

الله يعطيك العافية يابطل

تحتاج تستخدم الفواصل والنقط أكثر

وإنتبه للي لونتهم لك بالأحمر
حاول تشتغل عليهم

الله يوفقك

[m4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غزيّل الريم

When i had my first baby

i felt happy and scared at the same time. i was waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering what it is going to look like ! is it going to look like me or its father, its skin, is it white or brown ? at that time, the nurse entered and told me that i have guests
i used to enter my mother every now and then
when the nurse carried my baby and gave it to me, that was the most beautiful day in my life

^

اللي بالرمادي تركيبة الجملة صحيحة .. لكن مااعتقد انك كتبتيها زي ما قصدتي ..
اكتبيها لنا بالعربي خن نشوف

واذا فيه شي كتبته انا وهو غلط علميني .. لأن حاولت اكتب اللي بغيتي تقولينه

و ع فكرة : استخدمت it لأن مرة كتبتي مؤنث ومرة مذكر .. ف كتبت ع اساس انك ما تدرين وش جنسه

God bless you



You shouldn't be in level two

[حلم قلب]

nice idea
I am waiting next topic