استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بدويه

I will sharing some of my feeling in my best day of my life and I hope there are many days still I have under (best days of my life)


When I graduated from secondary school, we had a graduation day, All of us had particular clothes and there was a programe for that day.
Everyone had different hope but all had the same feeling(Happyness)[/COLOR], Our teachers & friends had glitter of joy on there eyes and have alot of hopes & dreaming of a wonderful future.
It's great day but I don't know it's the last time to see my friends (I am praying for them to be fine and have a greatful life with success and happyness)


Really, I'll never forget that day from my memory( forever ).

hello my friend
welcome
thanks for sharing that happy moments
i make some correction just in the spelling field
sharing------ share
لان بعد willالفعل يكون مجرد
]programe
خطأ املائي المفروض program
(Happyness
خطا املائي Happiness

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was لانك تتكلمي بالماضي

don't
لازم بالماضي didn't
with
من الافضل استخدام full

[sho_sho]

ابحاول لاول مره


Four years ago i had studid at aunversity in Riyadh .It was the university of Imam Muhammad bin Soud Islamic.I choce the Englsh deparment and i passd the final test .But i cann''t complete the first level becouse i got married and moved to anther city .One this day ,all wishes to return to be achieved

[P e a c e]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sho_sho

ابحاول لاول مره


Four years ago i had studid at aunversity in Riyadh .It was the university of Imam Muhammad bin Soud Islamic.I choce the Englsh deparment and i passd the final test .But i cann''t complete the first level becouse i got married and moved to anther city .One this day ,all wishes to return to be achieved

I was studying
The Islamic university of Imam Mohammad bin Saud الصفة قبل الموصوف
chose
إما يكون فيه فصل بين الجملتين اللي بينهم and ونحط نقطة. أو نشيل I. لكن في وضعها الحالي تسمى run on sentence
couldn't
another
On
all my wishes are to achieve what I choudn't in the past

محاولة جيدة ومستوى طيب

[بدويه]

شكراً
أفادني تصحيحكم


دمتم بود

[Amy!]

Salam everyone,

A lot of people say they don't have much happy days, and their life is full of tragedy and sadness . however, There is a lot of happy moments in life for everyone, but we don’t notice it . One of these moments is when you help someone in need, or when give charity to the poor people and you see the happiness on their faces, you become happy. when you give water for birds in a hot day and you see all of them coming towards the water, you will feel happy. When you succeed in your studying and you see your family happy for you, you feel happy. When you see ill people suffering and you have many and many of the blessings Allah gave you, you should be happy.
Happiness is something you feel not something you own, so it's not always a marital thing.
Feel happy and you will be happy

[roqa]

ok thanks for all

good beginning for all ,i wish sharing with you for this subject, But unfortunately it is not best day in my life This day has not yet come

All my days are similar

بالرغم من أنني أنا التي كتبت هذا العنوان .. لكن أوعد بالمرة القادمة أشارك معكم ..

وانتظروني غدا بإعلان اسم الفائز/ة ..

Gd luck for all

[roqa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Crimson Butterf

Salam everyone,

A lot of people say they don't have much happy days, and their life is full of tragedy and sadness . however, There is a lot of happy moments in life for everyone, but we don’t notice it . One of these moments is when you help someone in need, or when give charity to the poor people and you see the happiness on their faces, you become happy. when you give water for birds in a hot day and you see all of them coming towards the water, you will feel happy. When you succeed in your studying and you see your family happy for you, you feel happy. When you see ill people suffering and you have many and many of the blessings Allah gave you, you should be happy.
Happiness is something you feel not something you own, so it's not always a marital thing.
Feel happy and you will be happy

Oh thanks for nice words

ok i will write happy moments in my life

Thanks again

[فضيل]

Ebony and ivory live togather in perfect harmony
Why don't we

[roqa]

The best moment in my life

The best feeling when you enter the joy to the heart for anyone,I remember When I was in school I met Student distorted ,she was a new student in my class ,Her face was very scary and all students were looked scary for her face ,so i was very sadded for her ,I went to her and i was started talking with you and tryed to made ​​her feel more safe.she was very happy and she loved me so much.cause i was the only lady talked with you ,I mad maha more comfortable in the class and i was met her to my friends . That is my best moment in my life .


I hope if anyone found any mistake can you correction

[roqa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فضيل

Ebony and ivory live togather in perfect harmony
Why don't we

Who said don't we??