استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية

[roqa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رضوان

i was studying
the islamic university of imam mohammad bin saud الصفة قبل الموصوف
chose
إما يكون فيه فصل بين الجملتين اللي بينهم and ونحط نقطة. أو نشيل i. لكن في وضعها الحالي تسمى run on sentence
couldn't
another
on
all my wishes are to achieve what i choudn't in the past

محاولة جيدة ومستوى طيب

أهلا رضوان ..

نورت موضوعي بإفادتك الجميلة ..

بانتظار كتاباتك ..

[roqa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sho_sho

ابحاول لاول مره


Four years ago i had studid at aunversity in Riyadh .It was the university of Imam Muhammad bin Soud Islamic.I choce the Englsh deparment and i passd the final test .But i cann''t complete the first level becouse i got married and moved to anther city .One this day ,all wishes to return to be achieved

Welcome sho-sho

Gd start

[Turning point]

روكا انتظروني خلي اعلان النتايج مساء بليز اكتب من الجوال

[عَبَثْ]

رآحت علي ولا .. ؟!

لاني مآقرآت الا اول صفحتين ..

يعني نكتب هنآ .. ولا بموضوع جديد .. ولا

يآليت بسرعه عشآن افوز >> ارحمينآ بس

[roqa]

turning : ممكن أدلعك تورا ..أحس الاسم صعب ..

أوكي من عيوني بعد الساعة 10 بكرة ..

عبث ..ماراح عليكي شي حبيبتي موضوع هالأسبوع (Best day in your life ) ..

تقدري تلحقي عندك وقت من هلأ لبكرة الساعة 10 المسا ستتوقف المشاركات ..

دمتم بود ..

[m4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة roqa

The best moment in my life

The best feeling when you enter the joy to the heart for anyone,I remember When I was in school I met Student distorted ,she was a new student in my class ,Her face was very scary and all students were looked scary for her face ,so i was very sadded for her ,I went to her and i was started talking with you and tryed to made ​​her feel more safe.she was very happy and she loved me so much.cause i was the only lady talked with you ,I mad maha more comfortable in the class and i was met her to my friends . That is my best moment in my life .



I hope if anyone found any mistake can you correction

Hello

Very good but you need to work on the ones in red

[P e a c e]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Crimson Butterf

Salam everyone,

A lot of people say they don't have much happy days, and their life is full of tragedy and sadness . however, There is a lot of happy moments in life for everyone, but we don’t notice it . One of these moments is when you help someone in need, or when give 1 charity to the poor people 2 andyou 3 see the happiness on their faces 4, you become happy. when you give water for 5 birds in a hot day and you 6 see all of them coming towards 7 the water, you will 8 feel happy. When you succeed in your studying 9 and you 10 see your family happy for you, you feel happy. When you see ill people suffering and you have many and many of the 11 blessings Allah gave you, you should be happy.
Happiness is something you feel not something you own, so it's not always a marital 12 thing.
Feel happy and you will be happy

Are sure you're level 1? such a ncie one! your spelling and grammar are perfect

But I hope you focus on the followings:
1- Either you say or give or when giving
2,3,6,10,11- It's O.K. get rid of these words
4- I think the appropriate word is eyes
5- The correct preposition is to
7- This is British English, the American is toward
8- In the rest of "when" answers you used present time, so I think it's better to continue using the present.
9- I think the correct word is school
12- I didn't get you point here

Good luck

[prestigious]

ماشاء الله مبدعين ماشاء الله عليكم

اخت روكا ماشاء الله كتابه رائعه



المرحله الثانيه على الطلاب فقط؟ تسجيل اصواتهم وكل واحد يقرا قصته بصوته ويضعها هنا ونسمع صوته

للشباب فقط


اتمنى اعلان النتائج

[N3o0my]

Best moments


Best day in my life not coming yet. But I can say about the best moment in my life. When I was studying English diploma, that was challenge with myself because, I like this language so, I have to do all my best to get excellent. Two years had gone fast I felt so happy to finished study. But I think I cannot stop to studying English because I love it. After that i worked in English Academy that gave my chance to practice the language with foreign people . Now i'm here with you i hope we get all
best in our life.

[Turning point]

The Best day in my life

Light of the Qur'an
The best beautiful day in my life I finish preserver the Holy Quran
Day that honored the wife of Prince province Gave me the certificate
Shed my tears asked myself will remain until death in my heart ?
Can I work by the Quran
3 years of working for an end to this goal
Today I put my new goals and new work
It walked on the way arrived
We just try inevitably will change your life