I have a little lovely book

[HUNTER999]

Thank you very much ADAB ENGLISH for the great idea.
This idea is really the first step to the top, Keep up the good work.
Best regards

[HUNTER999]

It is really tiring writing and correcting in English

I hope I coverd all the mistakes & not doing others

Thank you English for correcting the mistakes, I agree with you for all what you have done.
Of course we get tired when we write in English because we always write in Arabic and I hope we let English as a habit in our life to surpass this problem
I have only one notice which is (what dose that matter ? ) the correction is ( what is the matter? )
My best wishes

[عبااديR]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة آداب انكليزي

Hi every body, I am going to write stories from small book, I believe its will help us to know how to read stories, plus to add so many words in our dictionary

first time for me to write something like this

Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I went to learn

Suggested

I hope to be canceled classification level of the first and fifth level, etc.

I want to learn

[English Literature]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انقلش

Think you very very match>> pls keep on >>

Thank not think


Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I want to learn

please


Now the fist story

first

(1)

Ail ,who was working a long way from home ,wanted to send a letter to his wife
,but he could neither read nor write .


better to say un educated;un lettered;illiterate

and he had to work all day , so he could only look for somebody to write his letter. late at night ,at last he found the house of a letter-writer whose name was Nasreddin .

no need to use and here just start a new sentence




better to say[COLOR="rgb(65, 105, 225)"] the letter--writer's house . he owns the house not the house owns the writer
[/COLOR]


.Nasreddin was already in bed .It was late , he said what do you want?



when you narrate in English they usually , they usually Quote the speech of the character then they refer to the him or her like following:

what do you want '', he said ''



I want you to write a letter to my wife ,said Ail .Nasreddin was not pleased.


He thought for a few seconds and then said, has the letter got to go far ?


seconds are plural we can not use the singular A here

also do not forget the


quotation marks





what dose that matter ?answered Ali.




again ,,,quotations



Well, my writing is so strange that only I can read it , and if I have to travel a long way to read your letter to your wife , it will cost you a lot of money .

quotation marks again


Ail went away quickly

?What was Ail doing
?Where was he
?What did he want to do
? What was nasreddin doing


SO LONG

I am now going to play football >>>>>>
or
I am going now to play football


all right

I am sorry to make tired


we will talk later on>>>

[P e a c e]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة البريئة2

good idea
i have one notice
im not sure
but in your title you said little and book
singular one book

is that right ?

Yes it's right

little comes with countable and noncountable
You can say little money or little girl

[البريئة2]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رضوان

Yes it's right

little comes with countable and noncountable
You can say little money or little girl

but mony is not singular
girl it have meaning it mean she small or so
book is different

[English Literature]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة البريئة2

but mony is not singular
girl it have meaning it mean she small or so
book is different

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gCklrNN80vI

[P e a c e]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة البريئة2

but mony is not singular
girl it have meaning it mean she small or so
book is different

little has a lot of meanings and usages, here are some of them
1- small in size:a little house | a cake decorated with little flowers.
2- only a small amount or hardly any of something: there is very little money letf.
3- young, little children are young: We didn't have toys like this when I was little.

so little book means small book

and it should come before adjective, I have a little lovley book NOT I have a lovely little book)

[~Mrs.ENGLI$H~]

I have only one notice which is (what dose that matter ? ) the correction is ( what is the matter? )

you may say that though I prefer the following: What !dose that matter? I think this sounds good

[~Mrs.ENGLI$H~]

I am sorry to make tired

I am sorry I made you tired


no problem , any thing in the beginning will be hard . we are all here to learn

we will talk later on>>>



I do not know it does not sound right to me! no need to use on ! only later