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2013- 8- 14 | #41 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
Fatimah I like the name Fatimah. It is the name of a girl. It is a good name because it is short. It is easy to say. It gets my attention. The name Fatimah looks beautiful when I wrote it on a paper. I like to sound it. Also, I love the meaning of the name. Finally, The Fatimah’s name is the most beautiful name. I want to change my name to Fatimah.
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2013- 8- 18 | #42 | |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
اقتباس:
Fatimah I like the name Fatimah. It is a name of a girl. It is a good name because it is short, easy to say and gets attention. The name Fatimah looked beautiful when I wrote it on a paper. I like to say it or the sound of it. I also love the meaning of it. Finally, The name Fatimah is the most beautiful name. I want to change my name to Fatimah.
I agree It is a great name :D Good paragraph |
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2013- 8- 18 | #43 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
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2013- 8- 19 | #44 | |
متميز بمسابقة الملتقى الرمضانية
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
اقتباس:
He was playing soccer بعكس الماضي البسيط اللي يتكلم عن شي حصل في الماضي في وقت محدد, مثلا He played soccer بالعربي نفس الفرق بين كان يلعب كرة القدم وبين لَعِبَ كرة القدم أو كان يذاكر وبين ذاكرَ |
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2013- 8- 26 | #45 |
أكـاديـمـي نــشـط
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
any more paragraphs ? =) xx
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2013- 8- 27 | #46 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
The Event Change My Life
I started studying when I was six years old. I studied day by day until I graduated from high school. I studied hard and got good test scores in high school, so I got into a good university. Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. I got lost a lot of friends, and I have new friends. I was talkative, but now I am quiet. Also, I was an excellent student, but now I am lazy student. I was happy all the time, but now I always sad. To sum up, Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. It changed many things in my life. |
2013- 8- 29 | #47 |
أكـاديـمـي نــشـط
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
The Event Change My Life
I started studying when I was six years old. I studied day by day until I graduated from high school. I studied hard and got good test scores in high school, so I got into a good university. Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. I got lost a lot of friends, and I have new friends. I was talkative, but now I am quiet. Also, I was an excellent student, but now I am lazy student. I was happy all the time, but now I always sad. To sum up, Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. It changed many things in my life. ______ The Event Change My Life add "that" its the same as saying "اللتي" .. and make the verb past, so The even that changed my life good test scores it's better to say Good grades and begin university student is the most important event in my life. لكي يكون التعبير اجمل .. and getting into university was an important event in my life I got lost a lot of friends you don't need the verb "got" so you just say I lost a lot of friends and I have new friends اطلقي العنان للتعبير .. حاولي تستخدمين كلمات متناسقه لبعض ، زي but that's okay because i made new friends but now I am lazy student you need to add an A when you're referring to something or making a status, so but now i am a lazy student. I was happy all the time, but now I always sad. its not right to say: I always sad you forget the am ! so .. now I'm always say بس افضل تعبيرا لو تقولين but now I'm feeling sad most of the time To sum up, Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. you don't have any mistake in this line but .. try to sometimes use some new words.. and always try your best to describe as much as possible .. so you could say: so basically, graduating from high school and starting a university life was again, the very important even that happened in my life. _________ you're getting better <3 اسفه لو تفلسفت واجد .. بس اتمنى لك الافضل ! حتى لو ما اخطاتي and don't forget to post more :P i enjoy helping you |
التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة Lujain_o ; 2013- 8- 29 الساعة 10:35 PM |
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2013- 9- 19 | #48 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
شكراً جزيلاً أختي الغالية ع المساعدة
إذا ممكن أحد يعلمني كيف أطور من جمال كتاباتي وأزيد عدد الكلمات سنتين وماتطورت كتابتي ساعدوني |
2013- 9- 22 | #49 | |
متميز بمسابقة الملتقى الرمضانية
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
اقتباس:
انتي خلال هذا الموضوع تطور أسلوبك في الكتابة, لا تقسي على نفسك التطور يأتي من خلال الممارسة المستمرة |
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2013- 10- 3 | #50 |
أكـاديـمـي فـعّـال
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رد: تصحيح أخطائي
شكراً على الدعم أخي الكريم
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