[ مذاكرة جماعية ] : يخسي مشروع التخرج الي بيفرقنا ....

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غلا مثايل

عندي سؤال صغنون مضحك من كثر وسوسه البحث الحين بعد اسمي ورقمي الكاديمي احط نقطه ولا لا صرت اوسوس من هالبحث

ما يحتاج

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مجمدالهنيدي

السلام عليكم ......
سمعت ان المشرف لا يعلق على الانتحال الان.....لكن في الفاينال درافت ....يعلقون عليه ....صحيح....المفروض انهم يعلقون على كل شي في البحث....

في الفصل الماضي كانو المشرفين يعلقو على الانتحال من البداية وشفت عدة حالات المشرف ينبه فيها على الانتحال

بس هذا الترم أشوف تحديدا الدكتور وليد عثمان يقول إنه ما راح يعلق على الانتحال من البداية, راح يرسب على طول كعقوبة للغش

اللي عارف نفسه مو غاش آخر همه هذا الموضوع, مدام المواقع قالت بحثك أصلي وانت عارف أن الكلام من راسك فما له داعي الخوف أبدا

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة noor albatool

عندي سؤال بسيط

انا عملت البحث بسرعة بسرعة وسلمت الفيرست درافت لضيق الوقت .... مع انو كان عندي كلام واجد واضافات

طيب اللحين سلمت الفيرست دارفت وعلق الدكتور وكتب ملاحظاته ...
سؤالي .. هل ممكن اضيف كلام زيادة واعدل في بعض المحتويات ولا لا ... لانو تعبت وانا ادورها .. حرام مااضيفها ؟؟؟؟

يفضل انك تكتفي بالرد على ملاحظات الدكتور أسلم لك

لكن إذا كنتي متأكدة 100% من صحة الإضافة وأن الدكتور راح تعجبه أضيفي ما عندك مشكلة

أنا عن نفسي سويت بعض التعديلات البسيطة بدون ما يطلب الدكتور وكل شي كان تمام

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Ŋoŋee

رضوان اذا اقتبست نص من كتاب
والنص هذا كاتب الكتاب مقتبسه
كيف اوثقه الله يسعدك

التوثيق يكون للمصدر الأساسي

يعني لو أنا ألفت كتاب واقتبست فيه نص من كتاب لسحاب الليل

إنتي لما تحبي توثقي النص ما تشيري إلى كتابي ولا إلك علاقة فيه, تشيري فقط إلى كتاب سحاب الليل اللي فيه النص

يعني مين اللي قال الكلام, تحطي معلوماته

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الاخ رضوان وبقيه الاخوه ارجو المساعده في مشروعي ارسل لي الدكتور رد غير مرضي ابي نصايحكم ومساعدتكم
اخاف احمل المادة ثالث مره الله يستر هذا رد الدكتور ،،،
I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for submitting your first drafts, good job!! . I have read all of your research proposals and I enjoyed reading many of them. Nevertheless, there were some issues that need to be addressed and those issues were shared in many proposals. I summarize serious issues below and I hope that you find them useful. The issues are expected as this is your first time writing a research proposal but you need to amend your documents and work on those issues and then submit the final draft on/before the deadline.


- First I hope that you can read my comments on your thesis statement as I explained to you what you should do. At the moment, your first draft is not satisfactory. Please don't copy any person's work and you need to write much much more under each section (e.g. significance of research, methodology, limitations of the study....etc). If you want, you can change the topic --as a help from me- to 'students' opinion about using literature to learn vocabulary in X school in Y city'. Then your methodology should include a questionnaire.

• The title has to be specific. It must tell the reader what exactly s/he will read. General topics are not accepted. For example (teaching speaking in Saudi Arabia = general and not accepted / The effectiveness of X method in improving students' speaking fluency in Y school in Z city = clear and specific). Please read the guide for more information. Your title and other sections, clearly, have to reflect what you are going to include in the research questions/methodology sections.

• The clarity of expression needs some improvements (e.g. some sentences are not clearly written). You might need to revise your document for grammatical errors as well. Some students wrote notes instead of paragraphs so please be advised that this is not acceptable.
• The table of contents should be organized in headings (e.g. 1 ----- 1.1 / 2 --- 2.1) where necessary. This link shows you how to create a table of content. http://office.microsoft.com/en-us/wo...001225372.aspx

• Please follow the format suggested in the guide (e.g. title- abstract- introduction – literature review—methodology) and write paragraphs under each heading. Please organize your sections as suggested in the guide. Please avoid writing in notes or short phrases. A paragraph or so under each heading will be enough (read the guide for the exact number of paragraphs).

• When you introduce an idea, please cite the reference. In other words, tell the reader where you read this idea (e.g. X is important in teaching Y according to White (1995). Then you need to include this source in the reference list. You can use some websites to help you organize your reference lists (e.g. reference machine).

• In the significance of research section, you need to convince the reader about the importance of your research (e.g. why is it important?).

• Your literature review has to be written in a coherent way. The sentences have to be linked to each other logically. There must be a clear 'line of argument' that the reader can follow. Towards the end of the literature review section, you have to reach the RESEARCH GAP. In other words, you need to Say that X did this, Y did that which is similar to what Z did but nobody looked at this issue (and this will be your main research point/question). You can work on your existing literature review or add few references to make the line of argument clear.

• Your research question/s have to be specific and related to one point only, which is the focus of your study. Some students included two or more research questions that are not related to each other and this is not acceptable. Also, you need to clearly state your research question/s or hypotheses after describing them in the paragraph (e.g. in numbered notes).


• Importantly, your methodology has to be appropriate for your research question. You can't use questionnaires to find a good way to teach speaking (for example). You can, of course, use questionnaires or interviews to elicit people's perceptions / thoughts about an idea, method, or approach. You need to write few sentences about your method (e.g. questionnaires/interviews or experiment). Mentioning that you will use X method is not enough. For instance, in my experiment there will be X, Y and Z. X is this. Y is that. Then you can explain how you will analyze your results (e.g. I will analyze the data qualitatively/ quantitatively --- I will use statistic tests - or will calculate the average of X -......etc.).

• In the Ethical consideration section, you might want to mention whether your participants are vulnerable (e.g. children – people with special needs…etc.). Also you might want to mention that you will get the 'ethical approval' from your department/college before colleting the data. Think about the 'consent form' which is a form participants have to sign. What will you include in it ? perhaps telling them what you are going to do with the data and who will have access to it, how you will analyze the data, and your contact information. You also need to tell them that they can withdraw from the experiment at any time.

• Limitations of the study has nothing to do with where you will conduct the research (e.g. the study will be conducted here or there…etc.). It is about the factors that could negatively influence your research (e.g. time limitations, possible delays due to XXX, participants might not take the questionnaires seriously/understand it…etc.).

• Please avoid writing as if the study has been carried out and published as this is a 'proposal' (e.g. the participants 'did not do this and that'). This is a proposal so you can write about what 'might/could happen' while conducting the research. In other words, avoid using the past form 'the research was conducted in X city' and use the future 'the research will be conducted in….etc'.

• Please only cite references that you have used and cited in your writing. Some students included references that they have not used in their writing and that is time-consuming because I have to read and check whether that student used the article or not in his writing. If you used it, cite it like this – X (year) said/stated/proposed/advocated/…etc.

• Please follow APA citation guidelines available here http://www.library.cornell.edu/resrch/citmanage/apa

Or you can use an online service that will do that for you. http://www.citationmachine.net/apa/cite-a-book#


• GENERAL REMINDER: Please avoid PLAGIARISM, copying or translating anyone else's work/research. When you submit your final draft, your paper will have to be checked by a software that can detect any copied, paraphrased or translated work that has not been referenced. Plagiarized work will get F (0). Please note that COPYONG one's work and writing the citation is still plagiarism. You need to paraphrase what the author said AND give reference. I'm sure some of you did not mean to copy but if it happened, please make sure that you only include your own writing and cite other people's work (e.g. say X (year) did this and that). Please read the guide for more information about how to avoid plagiarism. This is only a reminder so it does not necessarily relate to your work.
• On the first page of your proposal, please include the following declaration.
((((I confirm that this research proposal is my own work and that it is not copied/translated from any other person's work, and that it has not been previously submitted for assessment either at King Faisal University or any other educational institution. NAME)))))

Please note that I write these comments to help you get a better mark and pass the course. I look forward to reading your Final draft.

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أخوي فهد الكلام اللي كتبته عام والدكتور ما يكلم فيه شخص بعينه
هذي تنبيهات وتحذيرات عامة

المهم الملاحظات اللي كتبها لك الدكتور في بحثك

[وزيرة]

أخوي رضوان
حتى الدكتور وليد عثمـان عطاهـا لكم وحده معانـا على بلاطه وقال أن بحثج مسروق
كل الدكاتره هاالترم يلعبون عاالمكشوف :×

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رضوان

أخوي فهد الكلام اللي كتبته عام والدكتور ما يكلم فيه شخص بعينه
هذي تنبيهات وتحذيرات عامة

المهم الملاحظات اللي كتبها لك الدكتور في بحثك

طيب وين الملاحظات ممكن توضح اكثر لو عندك وقت

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فهد الحميدي

طيب وين الملاحظات ممكن توضح اكثر لو عندك وقت

الملاحظات يكتبها في نفس ملف الوورد اللي أرسلته له
يعني يكتب تعليقات داخل الملف

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة وزيرة

أخوي رضوان
حتى الدكتور وليد عثمـان عطاهـا لكم وحده معانـا على بلاطه وقال أن بحثج مسروق
كل الدكاتره هاالترم يلعبون عاالمكشوف :×

كذا أحسن من ما تتفاجأ الوحدة بالرسوب بدون إنذار

ألحين عندهم وقت يتداركون الأمر