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Fatimah

I like the name Fatimah. It is the name of a girl. It is a good name because it is short. It is easy to say. It gets my attention. The name Fatimah looks beautiful when I wrote it on a paper. I like to sound it. Also, I love the meaning of the name. Finally, The Fatimah’s name is the most beautiful name. I want to change my name to Fatimah.

[Esra2]

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Fatimah

I like the name Fatimah. It is the name of a girl. It is a good name because it is short. It is easy to say. It gets my attention. The name Fatimah looks beautiful when I wrote it on a paper. I like to sound it. Also, I love the meaning of the name. Finally, The Fatimah’s name is the most beautiful name. I want to change my name to Fatimah.

Fatimah

I like the name Fatimah. It is a name of a girl. It is a good name because it is short, easy to say and gets attention. The name Fatimah looked beautiful when I wrote it on a paper. I like to say it or the sound of it. I also love the meaning of it. Finally, The name Fatimah is the most beautiful name. I want to change my name to Fatimah.


I agree

It is a great name :D
Good paragraph

[Esra2]

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there is no one such my father in the world
أدق تعبيرأً ...(كقولك أبي نادر أو جوهرة ثمينه لا تشبه أحد )

Such as :P

[Hank]

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وأنت بألف خير أخي
عندي سؤال متى نستخدم الـ past continuous + اعطيني مثال للتوضيح

نستخدمه لما نتكلم عن شيء كان يحصل خلال فترة معينة في الماضي, مثلا
He was playing soccer
بعكس الماضي البسيط اللي يتكلم عن شي حصل في الماضي في وقت محدد, مثلا
He played soccer

بالعربي نفس الفرق بين كان يلعب كرة القدم وبين لَعِبَ كرة القدم

أو كان يذاكر وبين ذاكرَ

[Lujain_o]

any more paragraphs ? =) xx

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The Event Change My Life


I started studying when I was six years old. I studied day by day until I graduated from high school. I studied hard and got good test scores in high school, so I got into a good university. Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. I got lost a lot of friends, and I have new friends. I was talkative, but now I am quiet. Also, I was an excellent student, but now I am lazy student. I was happy all the time, but now I always sad. To sum up, Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. It changed many things in my life.

[Lujain_o]

The Event Change My Life


I started studying when I was six years old. I studied day by day until I graduated from high school. I studied hard and got good test scores in high school, so I got into a good university. Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. I got lost a lot of friends, and I have new friends. I was talkative, but now I am quiet. Also, I was an excellent student, but now I am lazy student. I was happy all the time, but now I always sad. To sum up, Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life. It changed many things in my life.


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The Event Change My Life
add "that" its the same as saying
"اللتي"
.. and make the verb past, so
The even that changed my life

good test scores
it's better to say
Good grades

and begin university student is the most important event in my life.
لكي يكون التعبير اجمل ..
and getting into university was an important event in my life

I got lost a lot of friends
you don't need the verb "got" so you just say
I lost a lot of friends

and I have new friends
اطلقي العنان للتعبير .. حاولي تستخدمين كلمات متناسقه لبعض ، زي
but that's okay because i made new friends

but now I am lazy student
you need to add an A when you're referring to something or making a status, so
but now i am a lazy student.

I was happy all the time, but now I always sad.
its not right to say: I always sad
you forget the am ! so ..
now I'm always say
بس افضل تعبيرا لو تقولين
but now I'm feeling sad most of the time

To sum up, Graduate from high school and begin university student is the most important event in my life.
you don't have any mistake in this line but ..
try to sometimes use some new words.. and always try your best to describe as much as possible .. so you could say:

so basically, graduating from high school and starting a university life was again, the very important even that happened in my life.
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you're getting better <3
اسفه لو تفلسفت واجد .. بس اتمنى لك الافضل ! حتى لو ما اخطاتي
and don't forget to post more :P i enjoy helping you

[ترانيم الوفاء]

شكراً جزيلاً أختي الغالية ع المساعدة
إذا ممكن أحد يعلمني كيف
أطور من جمال كتاباتي
وأزيد عدد الكلمات
سنتين وماتطورت
كتابتي
ساعدوني

[Hank]

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شكراً جزيلاً أختي الغالية ع المساعدة
إذا ممكن أحد يعلمني كيف
أطور من جمال كتاباتي
وأزيد عدد الكلمات
سنتين وماتطورت
كتابتي
ساعدوني

ليش سنتين ما تطورتي

انتي خلال هذا الموضوع تطور أسلوبك في الكتابة, لا تقسي على نفسك

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