Please, find attached my comments on your first draft. You should write the final draft on the cover page and on the title of your email. Please note that no feedback will be provided to your final draft. After finishing the suggested modifications, you have to upload your final draft to this email and to the icon of the graduation project. Please, don't send your final draft before 10-12-2016.
احد يقولي ايش تقصد بكلامها يعني مقبول البحث ولا لا انا فهمت ايش كاتبه بس مادري ماقالت ايش اسوي فيه يحتاج تعديل البحث ولا لا ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟