السلام عليكم ورحمه الله وبركاته
جاني الرد من الدكتور على المسوده الاولى
اذا سمحتم ابغى تفهموني اول نقطتين من كلامه
Dear student,
Well done
Please pay attention to the following notes
1. Capitalization
2. Rephrasing some sentences (missing articles)
3. Rephrasing the ethical consideration
4. In the methodology, please write in more details for example; mention the sample number and gender of your student ... etc.
Good luck
After you complete your project, send a final draft to me and upload the final draft to the university icon.