Nouf,
Please, find attached my comments on your first draft. You should write the final draft on the cover page and on the title of your email. Please note that no feedback will be provided to your final draft. After finishing the suggested modifications, you have to upload your final draft to this email and to the icon of the graduation project.
عدلولي لو فاهمة غلط ( وش يعني لا ردود فعل على المسوده الاخيره ؟؟ )