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اخذتها من موقع اجنبي الرايم حق قصيدة الموت
there is a regular four beat/three beat rhythm in each quatrain which helps reinforce the idea of a steady drive in a horse-drawn carriage. The rhyme scheme is abcb, each second line being full or slant with the fourth line:

Me/immortality

away/civility

ground/ground

day/eternity


وهذا الرايم تبع قصيدة الامل rhyme scheme: abcb, where each letter stands for that line's end rhyme. Here's an example of how that plays out in this poem's form:

"hope" is the thing with feathers - a
that perches in the soul -b
and sings the tune without the words -c
and never stops - at all – (1-4)b