المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أبو وسيم الشهري

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله


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وهذا رده

Hello,
Would you please find the attachment in this e-mail that contains my comments?
Remember, I will keep reviewing, comparing topics, and searching books. I will check online sources. If there is any plagiarism in your project, you will be responsible for that.
Try to write your final draft carefully taking into your consideration the steps that are stated in the Graduation Project Manual.

The following points are of high importance.
Your final draft should be submitted to me by the end of week 15 (On or before Thursday the 18th of May, 2017)(18-5-2017). Please write "Final Draft, Your Name, and Academic Number" in the title of your message (e-mail topic) when you send it to me. Your attachment should be in a Microsoft word format. Do not forget to write your name, final draft, and academic number as a title of your attachment such as (Mohammed Marwan AlAssaf, final draft, 2324362762).The final draft will then be evaluated out of 70 points according to the following criteria.
A) 10 points are assigned for a complete abstract and a good introduction with a clear thesis statement.
B) 10 points are assigned for a brief review of previously published literature on the topic being researched (at least two previous studies).
C) 10 points are assigned for a clearly stated research question, and overview of the research's significance.
D) 10 points are assigned for a detailed research methodology that includes the tools to be used in the study, and how the collected data will be gathered and analyzed. If your proposal contains an ethical considerations section, it will be included in the evaluation here as well.
E) 10 points are assigned for an overview of the limitations and the expected results of the study.
F) 10 points are assigned for use of correct grammar, spelling and punctuation.
G) 10 points are assigned for a complete table of contents and a well-organized list of references used in the study.
Each criterion above will be assigned points according to the following scale:
Excellent: 10 to 9 points out of 10 points
Good: 8 to 7 points out of 10 points
Fair: 6 to 5 points out of 10 points
Lacking: 4 to 3 points out of 10 points
Poor: 2 to 1 points out of 10 points
Unacceptable: 0 out of 10 points


In summary: marks of this course are divided as follows:
Research proposal: 70 marks
Viewing recorded lectures: 30 marks

Good Luck