Please, find attached my comments on your first draft. Send me the final draft after you make all the suggested changes, and also upload it to the university website. Please note that no feedback is provided to your final draft. You should write the final draft on the cover page and in the title of your email. Don’t send your final draft before 10-5-2017.
الدكتور رسلي هالكلام يعني اعدل وارسل ويرد علي؟
ولا خلاص اعدل وارسل الفاينل مافهمت :(