· You have to organize your ideas much better.
· Capitalize the initials of the title.
· Pay more attention to punctuation.
· Clarify the importance of the research.
· It is good that you have put a sample of questions of your interview.
· References should be stated correctly. (Where is the publisher’s city…etc) Also, add the access date to the online sources.
Good luck
Supervisor: Mahmoud AlAkhras
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