ياجماعه هذا رد الدكتور ع الفرست درافت والله مافهمت وش يبي
1- This is a theoretical discussion and not a research proposal-What is your hypothesis?
2-Theoretical framework, conclusion, recommendation: The course has not specified these as sections in the proposal-You must only include the sections specified to u.
3-Where is the expected results section?????
4-The objectives of the research can not be after the methodology!! It should be included in the abstract
5-U can not have two tables of contents. The one in the box is not part of the research proposal!
6-What is the objectives of your research?
7-This is a theoretical discussion and not a scientific proposal as it should be
8-What are the interviews about??? How can u have interviews without saying what information u want from them
9-I have not seen your proposal before and ur research was done in in a hurry.
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