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ياجماعه هذا رد الدكتور ع الفرست درافت والله مافهمت وش يبي
1- this is a theoretical discussion and not a research proposal-what is your hypothesis?
2-theoretical framework, conclusion, recommendation: The course has not specified these as sections in the proposal-you must only include the sections specified to u.
3-where is the expected results section?????
4-the objectives of the research can not be after the methodology!! It should be included in the abstract
5-u can not have two tables of contents. The one in the box is not part of the research proposal!
6-what is the objectives of your research?
7-this is a theoretical discussion and not a scientific proposal as it should be
8-what are the interviews about??? How can u have interviews without saying what information u want from them
9-i have not seen your proposal before and ur research was done in in a hurry.
Please follow the guides above in the final draft. Do not resend.we only correct the first draft.