هذا رد الفريدان علي
Thank you for sending your first draft.
Please revise the following:
1- Plagiarism. Note that if your work is plagiarized your project will fail. Use proper ways of citations and quotations.
2- Check your citations and references within your work against the list of references at the end of your proposal. Make sure they are all there.
3- Revise your language. Double check spelling and grammatical mistakes.
4- For better quality of work, check the published manual about how to write your proposal and adhere to the instructions there.
After you do all the required revisions and feel sure about it, upload your work in the assigned icon in the students services in the deanship website. The deanship will make the icon available according to the announced calendar.
Remember to upload your final work on time.
Again, plagiarism is strictly prohibited and it may fail you. This is your chance to amend anything before final submission.