هذا رد الدكتور هل يجب علي إرسال التعديلات للدكتور ولا أبدأ في كتابة المسودة أتمنى المساعدة ولكم جزيل الشكر مقدماً
This seems to be fine but you need to be specific about what aspect of the envirnment that influences the students. If you are not sure please choose a school or TV or Internet...etc. Also, indicate which tools you are going to use.
Please make the necessary amendments that i asked you to do and then start writing your first draft (see the Guide for this course) but please avoid plagiarism.
All the best