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Your proposal is a result of google translation. Therefore, all sections are not clear.
1- Rewrite the sections in good English.
2- Write the introduction in 2-3 paragraphs.
3- Literature review in 2-3 paragraphs.
4- List the references you used ( at least 2 references )
5- Write clear headings in larger font.
6- Send your final draft. Make sure it is all your work. Any uncredited paragraphs or translations from other writers will be considered cheating and will result in failing the course.
Bassam Saideen - Mob. 0563378936
English Language Center
King Faisal University