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Your topic is to broad; you need to narrow it down. Plus, I could not understand the relation between the pilot study and your proposal!
I still need more details about how you plan to do your research. I recommend that you read the project guide carefully so you understand what is required. You need to write a research proposal not an essay and this requires that you have a research question or a research problem and a methodology that you follow to find an answer or a solution to your research question. Also remember that sending me research you found on a website or one that is written by someone else is not acceptable.