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تخطيت السحاب · 2014- 12- 6

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اقتباس:

i have read the first draft of your proposal and here are some things you should consider in your final draft:

read through your paper again and make sure to correct all grammar, spelling and punctuation mistakes.

your abstract section should be a summary of your research question, methodology and expected results.

use correct citation of references. For example, to cite pages 23-45 from the 12th edition of a book called "importance of knowledge" written by alex hardy in 2002, and published by penguin in new york, you do the following:
in-text: (hardy, 2002, pp. 23-45)

your literature review section should have quotes and very brief summaries of what other researchers said about the topic you're discussing. See here for more info: http://faculty.mwsu.edu/psychology/l..._litreview.pdf

your methodology section is too short. You need to give more details about how you're going to do this research. What tools are you going to use? How are you going to use them? What kind of information are you looking for? How are you going to collect it? Answers to questions like these can help you expand this section. Move some of that information from the appendix to this section.

yout ethical considerations section needs improvement. Mention the ways through which you make sure you are: Fair with the participants in your study, don't put them in danger, only collect information from them with their permission, and make sure they know everything they need about the research you are asking them to participate in. It might also involve getting the necessary permissions from authorities (e.g. School principals, parents ..etc). Basically tell us how you will make sure people who participate in your research will not be unhappy or feel deceived after you collect the information you need from them.

here is how to cite websites in your references: http://www.easybib.com/reference/guide/apa/website

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