المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة someone,, Thank you for mention it .... please tell me what were my mistakes, if may I ask ,,,,,,,

You are welcome

Well your mistakes are not that big it is just simply a grammar issue, but I will tell you to learn,,

First In your post above there are some mistakes such as (mention it, you should say mentioning it) Second this is you should say (If I may ask) this is regarding your

Hi
how are you all ,I hope everything is ok with you ...
I am (sooo) ( try to use correct words to benefit more) excited (tbh) (try to use full words with no short cuts to avoid forgeting the vocabulary) and I wish you a good luck all of you and me (I think it is better to say, I wish good luck to you all and me)
thanks for this good page (Or you can use "post" instead of page as it is a forum post) we (all are) gonna get benefit all of us (going to) (No need to put get) (you shall change it to "from it")