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قديم 2015- 2- 12   #14
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تاريخ التسجيل: Fri Apr 2014
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الكلية: كليه الاداب
الدراسة: انتساب
التخصص: English
المستوى: المستوى الثامن
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رد: قروب level 3 حيـآكمـ シ

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You are welcome

Well your mistakes are not that big it is just simply a grammar issue, but I will tell you to learn,,

First In your post above there are some mistakes such as (mention it, you should say mentioning it) Second this is you should say (If I may ask) this is regarding your

Hi
how are you all ,I hope everything is ok with you ...
I am (sooo) ( try to use correct words to benefit more) excited (tbh) (try to use full words with no short cuts to avoid forgeting the vocabulary) and I wish you a good luck all of you and me (I think it is better to say, I wish good luck to you all and me)
thanks for this good page (Or you can use "post" instead of page as it is a forum post) we (all are) gonna get benefit all of us (going to) (No need to put get) (you shall change it to "from it")

OR Thanks for this post that will benefit us all

This is my opinion, and if I made any mistake, please correct me , because I am still learning like you all :) thanks




that was great and amazing to find someone can help us to improve our language ....I really grateful for what you did ....thank you so much

about your mistakes there are alot and one post wont be enough hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I m joking
your english is very good and good luck for all of us


thank you so much
please correct me

التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة someone,, ; 2015- 2- 12 الساعة 09:32 AM