السلام عليكم شباب الدكتور ارسلي ملاحظاته على بحثي وهذي الملاحظات
Dear Student,
1- There are a lot of grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes throughout the whole document. Please correct them. I highlighted a few of them as examples to you; however, there are many others that you need to correct yourself.
2- You have to divide your project into sections: Introduction, n..etc. Please read the conclusioLiterature review, Methodology and graduation project manual for how you should do that.
3- The grammatical structures you used are used incorrectly; something which makes it difficult to understand what you are trying to say.
4- Please refer to the graduation guide and follow the instruction in relation to the styling and font of the document.
5- The minimum word limit is 1800 words. Thus, you need to write more.
Please make sure that all of these problems fixed before sending me your final draft.
تكفون ابيكم تساعدوني في بحثي الله يجزاكم خير.