You need to have a cover page, a table of content, and to write the section titles in bold, and to be organized.
I could not read this because it is very messy. You need to pay attention to capital letter and all spelling and grammar points.
On Sat, Apr 25, 2015 at 6:09 PM, <albishiabdulrahman1@gmail.com --هذي رسالت الدكتور لي اللي يقدر يساعدني الله يكتب له التوفيق ولكم جميع