ردت علي وقالت انتي طالبة ممتازة بسfind attached my comments......and send the first draft
red words should be written as they are
you should leave margin at the begining of each paragraph.
وفيه اشياء طلبت مني احذفها بس اذا حذفتها بتنقص الكلمات وش اسوي