I can see that you have done a good work, but the number of words should be between 1800 to 2000 words (not including the cover page). You should follow this in your research and send it again to be checked. The deadline for the submission of the final draft is on 19-11-2015.
Good Luck,
هذا رد الدكتوره بس الي مافهمته هل ازيد عدد الكلام وارسلها بالفرست درافت في نفس الرساله اوارسله على طول بالفاينل