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رد: ۞ ... هنا تجمع مشروع التخرج ( طالبات ) - المُشرفة فاطمة الزهراء الشحات ... ...۞
السلام عليكم صباح الخير رد المشرف الخطيب على الفرست درفت امس وكان رده This looks interesting however you should spend more time on revising this work to make its parts more linked.
Some sentences are very long and fragmented, e.g. Although ... The second part of this sentence is missing.
Some sentences are hard to followed.
In the research question section, you did not write your research question but you talked about your research aims.
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ممكن اعرف وش يبي بالضبط هل اعيد الصياغه من أول وجديد والا كيف
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