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You have done a good work. Please, find attached my comments on your first draft. You should finish them and send the final draft. You should write final draft in the title of your email.
Good Luck,
انا ردت علي اليوم بس في شغله في كلام حددته بالاحمر وكلام بقى بالاسود مثل مااهو وشي خططت عليه بالاسود وهذا حذف والملاحظات بالازرق طيب الي بالاحمر يبقى مثل مااهو والي ماحركته بالاسود شنو اسوي فيه
The font is 12 Times New Roman. The space between lines is 1.5. You should review the structure
sentences in the whole research. The highlighted sentence is an example of incorrect structure.
You should review the guide to know how to write the references correctly.