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1-Revise your title. It sounds general. You were told to make it more specific.
Your paper is too short. The first and the last pages do not count.
2-Proofread your paper very well. There many mistakes. Avoid these mistakes in your final paper.
Proofread your title. It is not written proerley.
1-You are missing many parts of thecomplete research. See the Graduation Manual