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First of all, you submitted the proposal long time after the deadline (31st of October). You must re-work on this proposal. There are many grammatical problems and sometimes the structure is not accurate, e.g. (In Conclusion translation is one of the hardest topics that translator careful when you write about. In my opinion not everyone could speak English able to translator). This sentence is not accurate. This does not look like a research project but rather an assignment. You need to check the graduation project manual on your blackboard site.
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