·If you have other references, you may add them because there are many writers who have discussed this topic.
·There are many grammatical mistakes.
·Pay more attention to punctuation.
·Clarify the importance of the research.
·Capitalize the initials of the title.
·There is somehow a kind of repetition. Avoid it.
References should be stated correctly. (Where is the publisher’s city…etc)
هذه ملاحظات الدكتور وأعتقد أنها شاملة للجميع خصوصاً الملاحظات باللون الأحمر