Hello there,
Just to let you know that it is very early for me to look at any first draft. I usually encourage all students to keep working on their draft for at least 6 weeks after I approve their topics. Now, you can keep it and wait for my respond or resend it to me after one month.
Dr. Fahad
هذ رد الدكتور والله مافهمت منه؟؟؟