2016- 4- 24
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أكـاديـمـي
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افيدوني
السلام عليكم جميعا
يالربع انا أرسلت الفرست درافت للدكتور عبدالله الملحم وشوفوا رده وأتمنى اللي عندي معلومة عن رده يفيدني
والله يوفق الجميع
greetings
first of all, again you are very late thus yu will lose marks
second, you have issues that needs to be addressed
1- you have grammatical issues in almost all of your project
2- your abstract needs to be modified, you can use this link to help you out
3- your way of referencing is wrong and not enough references ( you need more than 8 references) plus you need to make some inciting
please use the Oxford system of referencing
you need to submit
your final draft maximum by 28 April, otherwise you will fail
regards
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