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it is right

but this need little bet of correction

and i have taransiltion mayber mre correct than you = and I have translation
maybe more correct than yours



at about ten o,clock the wind grew stronger = Umm don't think so, cause we don't usually say grow with the word wind. also you should write clock like this. also no need for at in the begining.

so what you meant is

about ten clock, the wind became stronger than before


regards, sis