ملتقى طلاب وطالبات جامعة الملك فيصل,جامعة الدمام - عرض مشاركة واحدة

P e a c e · 2011- 9- 16

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أحمد باسمح

Hello everyone !!
First, I'd like to thank ( Heart Story ) for this topic and for your efforts in our great forum .
And I really like your optimistic character ! , so please keep going and never give up .

Second , let me say that ,
It's really good to find a topic allows English students to gather & communicate with each other .
But we are not walking in any obvious way,
I mean that there isn't any specific Idea in this topic, is there ?

So let's think about something ,
Do you have any suggestions or opinions ?

Regards

When I have mistaken , I'll be very happy to see my mistakes .

Hi man,
I think the purpose of this topic is to get used to speak in English. But the problem is it's not enough, there should be error checking - as you requested, and I have couple of points for you for what you've written

Here we start:

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First, I'd like to thank ( Heart Story ) for this topic and for your efforts in our great forum .

To whome the pronoun "your" is referred to, if it is to (Heart Story) then it should be "her", because you menshend Heart Story as a "third person singular", and the pronoun which refers to it must be at same type.

The other one is:

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I mean that there isn't any specific Idea in this topic, is there ?

Using tag questions in paragraphs or articles, maybe it's not a mistake, but for sure it's unusual. I think the main usage for it is in conversations.