Hi man
Hello man
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I think the purpose of this topic is to get used to speak in English. But the problem is it's not enough, there should be error checking
Improving our skills in writing is the purpose of this topic undoubtedly ,
but in my opinion I see it will be easier to write if it was about an specific topic, specially
for beginners
And I do agree with you, there should be someone who takes the responsibility of error checking
- as you requested, and I have couple of points for you for what you've written
Here we start:
To whome the pronoun "your" is referred to, if it is to (Heart Story) then it should be "her", because you menshend Heart Story as a "third person singular", and the pronoun which refers to it must be at same type.
you are right I should have used the pronoun " her
And now it is my turn to correct you
You've wrote "menshend", but the correct spelling is "mentioned
The other one is:
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Using tag questions in paragraphs or articles, maybe it's not a mistake, but for sure it's unusual. I think the main usage for it is in conversations.
This is a new information was given to me