ملتقى طلاب وطالبات جامعة الملك فيصل,جامعة الدمام - عرض مشاركة واحدة

English Literature · 2011- 9- 23

First of all I want to thank every body her >> I am happy >> to correct my mistakes

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة انقلش

Think you very very match>> pls keep on >>

Thank not think

I will promise not to repeat it again

Pleas correct my mistakes( grammar & spilling ) any time really I want to learn

اقتباس:

please

Now the fist story

first

(1)

اقتباس:

Ail ,who was working a long way from home ,wanted to send a letter to his wife
,but he could neither read nor write .

better to say un educated;un lettered;illiterate

I think it will become difficult in the context and

pronunciation!!

اقتباس:

>>>>
and he had to work all day , so he could only look for somebody to write his letter. late at night ,at last he found the house of a letter-writer whose name was Nasreddin .

no need to use and here just start a new sentence

!! Still in the context of the sentence

اقتباس:

better to say[COLOR="rgb(65, 105, 225)"] the letter--writer's house . he owns the house not the house owns the writer

I did not find this sentence>

اقتباس:

.Nasreddin was already in bed .It was late , he said what do you want?

when you narrate in English they usually , they usually Quote the speech of the character then they refer to the him or her like following:

what do you want '', he said ''

I want you to write a letter to my wife ,said Ail .Nasreddin was not pleased.

He thought for a few seconds and then said, has the letter got to go far ?

seconds are plural we can not use the singular A here

its Come with( a few
Not related to the singular or plural

اقتباس:

also do not forget the

quotation marks

Question mark located

اقتباس:

what dose that matter ? answered Ali.

Question mark located

again ,,,quotations

اقتباس:

Well, my writing is so strange that only I can read it , and if I have to travel a long way to read your letter to your wife , it will cost you a lot of money .

quotation marks again

! There is no formula question

God bless you