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Nice topic as usual
Thank you very much

and I have some notices, if you don't mind, I think you just missed them while writing, not that you don't know about them

اقتباس:
these pictures will speak for it self
"Pictures" is plural, so it must take the pronoun them, and it becomes them selves

اقتباس:
Main thing is accept who you're
the word "thing" is singular, and every singular word has to have something before it. Here we should put "The" before "main thing".

The verb comming After "is" should either have "-ing" at the end of it or "to" just before it. So we should write "is accepting" or "is to accept"

Another problem here is that "are" is in a stress possition in the sentence, so it shouldn't be reduced.

اقتباس:
there are worse than you
I am not sure of this, and please correct me if I'm wrong.
"worse" can't come as a subject if it's used in comparison
so we should say:
there are people worse than you

And thank you again