2012- 5- 30
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أكـاديـمـي ذهـبـي
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رد: استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية
اقتباس:
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hebaf
when i born first baby..  ... ..
I feel happy and scared at the same time. I am waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering how it looks my child? Is she same look like me or like her father, his skin is white or brown .. At the time entered the nurse tells me you have guests,I used to enter my mother every now and then, if the nurse carrying my baby and give me him as the most beautiful that day
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When i had my first baby
i felt happy and scared at the same time. i was waiting in my room in the hospital, wondering what it is going to look like ! is it going to look like me or its father, its skin, is it white or brown ? at that time, the nurse entered and told me that i have guests
i used to enter my mother every now and then
when the nurse carried my baby and gave it to me, that was the most beautiful day in my life
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اللي بالرمادي تركيبة الجملة صحيحة .. لكن مااعتقد انك كتبتيها زي ما قصدتي ..
اكتبيها لنا بالعربي خن نشوف 
واذا فيه شي كتبته انا وهو غلط علميني .. لأن حاولت اكتب اللي بغيتي تقولينه
و ع فكرة : استخدمت it لأن مرة كتبتي مؤنث ومرة مذكر .. ف كتبت ع اساس انك ما تدرين وش جنسه 
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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة غزيّل الريم ; 2012- 5- 30 الساعة 04:05 AM
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