2012- 5- 31
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متميزة بقسم التعليم عن بعد - اللغة الانجليزية
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رد: استمتع معنا في أحلى اجازة مسابقة نصوص انجليزية
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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة بدويه
I will sharing some of my feeling in my best day of my life and I hope there are many days still I have under (best days of my life)
When I graduated from secondary school, we had a graduation day, All of us had particular clothes and there was a programe for that day.
Everyone had different hope but all had the same feeling(Happyness)[/COLOR], Our teachers & friends had glitter of joy on there eyes and have alot of hopes & dreaming of a wonderful future.
It's great day but I don't know it's the last time to see my friends  (I am praying for them to be fine and have a greatful life with success and happyness)
Really, I'll never forget that day from my memory( forever ).
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hello my friend
welcome
thanks for sharing that happy moments
i make some correction just in the spelling field
sharing------ share
لان بعد willالفعل يكون مجرد
]programe
خطأ املائي المفروض program
(Happyness
خطا املائي Happiness
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was لانك تتكلمي بالماضي
don't
لازم بالماضي didn't
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من الافضل استخدام full
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التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة white tulip ; 2012- 5- 31 الساعة 12:04 AM
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